Reviews for Memories of a broken soul
Dianne060807 chapter 6 . 10/17/2014
Update please. :))))
TheFallenGeneral chapter 6 . 10/17/2014
Will Ichigo meet a young Retsu Unohana as well? Wasn't she with Shunsui and Jushrio at that time? I don't remember Bleach that much anymore... I stopped at the Winter War saga, so I'm really rusty at this knowledge.
Kurama's Foxy Rose chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
It's prologue at the beginning of a story, epilogue is at the end.
Erasels chapter 6 . 10/16/2014
Well, I read through all of the current chapters in one session and I must say I'm impressed.
You do the "The past was terrible and everybody I loved died..." thing that is quickly getting as old as Naruto "Getting attacked by the villagers" theme, but you executed it well and thus your story is quite high in my books. Your grammar is pretty good, I've only spotted three mistakes that I cared to remember. The only thing I'm concerned about is, that the next time skip will be a big one, which would be sad, because the tale you are weaving is still rather unique.
With all that said, I thank you for sharing this great fic with us.
(•3•) Puhhh
Dianne060807 chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
A new chapter! Gosh! I'm ecstatic! Loving these scenes so much. I can't wait to read more about the budding friendship between these three and i really wonder how things would be when we get to the original timeline. :) update again soon! Thanks! :)
Genisyn69 chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
brutal ending... can't wait for more! I really hope he doesn't develop some fakeness routine, or ability for that matter. I'd hate to see all of ichigo dissapear in there... but if he did I think you'd do a good job of growing the character rather than rehashing the same ichigo.
Parzival vi Britannia chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
im gonna be honest, your focusing too much on ichigos angst and its making the story seem go slow, and thus im skimming thru the chapters... dont make this in to a pure angst fic b/c i can clearly see the potential in your writing and this story...
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
hope his current attitude get better soon it is depressing me right now lol

Ichigo will become good friends with Shunsui Kyōraku and Jūshirō Ukitake in time.

I always thought it would be a cool twist if when Ichigo came out of the shattered shaft with no sword and had to be given a Asauchi by Kisuke Urahara and forcing Kisuke to change the training method for Ichigo and find more to do it in.
WhoFeedYasuo chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
While i read this i was mentaly listening to a bleach soundtrack (the one when ichigo is about to die against byakuya)... weird. Well Nice chapter.
Grinja chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
I have to admit, I wasn't feeling this chapter quite as much as some of the others. Really dark and depressing. Now that he can carry Zangetsu, I hope some of the angst is buried.
JJN37 chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
That was a really awesome chapter I'm gonna go read the preview
Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
great chapter as always.
keep up the good work
creativesm75 chapter 5 . 10/13/2014
interesting
Hachikonohime chapter 5 . 10/12/2014
Arrrrrggh! the suspense is killing me, mein gott.
You are one of a hell of a writer, that's some mean cliff hangers you got there.
Pretty much Ichigo is acting like his pre-getsuga form. So cool despite of the warm colors he bears.
I guess Ichigo might finally realize what Aizen felt for having such awesome power, to be powerful in exchange for companionship.

I wanna see more!
MORE! /shot

Please Update as soon as you can :D
attackthesky chapter 5 . 10/11/2014
Ah man I really like this. You need to update sooner though.! Great job! :)
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