Reviews for Memories of a broken soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concept. I liked the GRRM reference. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I like where this story is headed. Great job so far. I look forward to the next chapter and wish you luck. I plan to be along for the ride. |
![]() ![]() like it! |
![]() ![]() good second chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I definitely don't find this boring I really enjoy these kinds of chapters as long as they have a purpose and I'm fine with a few less important OCs so all good there. I hope you get the next chapter out pretty quick cause I'm really enjoying this plus your an amazing writer |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you making it dramatic till the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! For a start it's perfect! Noting to say at all for the moment good luck for the rest of your story! Blueday00 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Normally I dont really like OCs since so many authors cock them up so badly that I just close the tab. This however is very interesting and looks like its going to be one helluva read. Great job and I hope to see more in the future best regards Friaku |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. I like it a lot, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more. Also your OCs seem perfectly plausible and I appreciate that. Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, emotional, great chapter this was, this story will be great |
![]() ![]() It has a deep feeling to it and it shows the emotions very clearly. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start, liking it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed that I hope your chapters stay that discriptive I'll be waiting for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise is interesting. So far i've enjoyed your other 3 stories, looks like this one will be good too. |