Reviews for Memories of a broken soul
Qwerty321 chapter 3 . 8/28/2014
Interesting concept. I liked the GRRM reference.
Zanthraxone chapter 2 . 8/26/2014
Oh I like where this story is headed. Great job so far. I look forward to the next chapter and wish you luck. I plan to be along for the ride.
mugetsudude chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
like it!
yoruichifan chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
good second chapter
JJN37 chapter 2 . 8/16/2014
I definitely don't find this boring I really enjoy these kinds of chapters as long as they have a purpose and I'm fine with a few less important OCs so all good there. I hope you get the next chapter out pretty quick cause I'm really enjoying this plus your an amazing writer
Mas2009 chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
are you making it dramatic till the end?
blueday00 chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
Hello!
For a start it's perfect!
Noting to say at all for the moment good luck for the rest of your story!

Blueday00
Kestes chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
Wow. Normally I dont really like OCs since so many authors cock them up so badly that I just close the tab. This however is very interesting and looks like its going to be one helluva read. Great job and I hope to see more in the future
best regards
Friaku
Moon's last stand chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
I like this. I like it a lot, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more. Also your OCs seem perfectly plausible and I appreciate that. Happy writing!
anburukia chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
Wow, emotional, great chapter this was, this story will be great
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
It has a deep feeling to it and it shows the emotions very clearly.
Keep up the good work.
anburukia chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Good start, liking it
JJN37 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
I really enjoyed that I hope your chapters stay that discriptive I'll be waiting for the next chapter
Chipoltaway chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Interesting premise is interesting. So far i've enjoyed your other 3 stories, looks like this one will be good too.
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