Reviews for Keep Your Enemies Close
Guest chapter 11 . 4/29/2015
I love it and it really did feel like an ending a perfect ending I loved all of it maybe you shold end it here its like a happy ever after ending :D
acherelle1 chapter 11 . 4/30/2015
Please keep going! I so want know if Jet will go after Zuko or not. Is he even more jealous knowing that Zuko has left Jet in search of her? So many possibilities! Please continue :)
Jasmine Mikasa Scarlet chapter 11 . 4/30/2015
I'm loving the story so far it's unique for an atla fan fiction. I think Jet's feelings should be expanded upon. He should eventually join the group and make it clear that he really cares for Zuko reluctantly. Katara and Jet should agree to share him. Also, more plot elements wouldn't be such a bad thing. Although, I do enjoy the emphasis on the sexy moments. Maybe something about how the three of them fighting along side each other makes a deadly trio and how the extra adrenaline they accumulate needs to be burnt off in a sexy fun way. This has turned into me rambling but... I'm going to continue and say maybe Zuko needs them both to heal all parts of him, so that he can finally bend lightning. Katara needing comfort in Jet and Zuko when she seeks her mother's killer and actually kills him. Or you could go in a completely different direction with the three of them being spiritually connected which heighten all of their powers through some ancient spirit that primitive firebenders used to worship at an island off the fire nation named pompeii (lol). I know this is one big long rant, but I would like you to continue writing, because I love how you write the interactions between the three characters. I never imagined them this way, but now that I have I can't get them out of my head.
gh0stwriter chapter 11 . 4/30/2015
To stop now would be hazardous to my health. Great fic. I like what jet did and i NEED to see what happens when he finds out that he was on the outside of Zuko and Katara's secret.
Jasmine Mikasa Scarlet chapter 4 . 4/28/2015
I'm so happy you decided to write this because I intentionally went looking for this pairing. I really enjoy what you've done with this scenario. It's so good I have to take moments in the story to reread what I just read because it's that amazing.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/22/2015
Yeap, they can't stay forever the three of them like that, hiding from the world. And the cliffhanger at the end probably is the action of one of them. How interesting and exciting!
LovinZuko chapter 10 . 4/23/2015
I'm guessing its Jet that is doing something with her. Getting rid of her maybe? or returning her to her family? Ooooooo is it Sokka that's taking her cuz he's been spying? I need to know :D
Zuko-of-Asgard chapter 10 . 4/23/2015
Ahhh ! I LOVE it ! Especially the Jetko, I originally started this whole fandom with Zutara, but along the way it kinda - died - yeah - lol, keep up the good work !
acherelle1 chapter 9 . 4/22/2015
Also, it seems like Jet's obsession with Zuko is making him more jealous of Katara. He doesn't seem too keen on Katara being there anymore. I even wonder if he falling in love with Zuko? I had to post my review on this chapter instead of the last one because I could leave more than one view per chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
acherelle1 chapter 10 . 4/22/2015
I get so excited when I see an update for this story! I love this story, especially the Jetko. You write them all very well, especially Jet. Jet is a very complex character and you've written his manipulative personality so well. It's one of the things I love about him :). Katara is a nice bonus too. Can't wait for a new update!
Guest chapter 9 . 4/15/2015
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you for updating!
Foxxxy the Stripper chapter 9 . 4/17/2015
Nice...I love reading this for some odd reason but none the less...I LOVE IT
Guest chapter 9 . 4/15/2015
Wow. Lol I don't remember when you last posted so when I came to read it again and it said three hours since post I got so excited lol I had to reread it lol. Your writing can take what happened in a moment but its like you stretched it out longer. Hope that makes sense. All I mean is you are really good at describing where they are looking. What they are doing. How they feel goosebumps to gasps. I like this fanfiction of yours )
Guest chapter 9 . 4/14/2015
Guest chapter 8 . 1/22/2015
I love this story, update soon please! I'm curious to see how this relationship will continue between the 3 of them...will zuko and katara run away together one day? Will jet find out lee is actually zuko, a fire nation prince? Ahhhhhh so many questions!
I hope you didn't f or get about this story!
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