Leo valdez is like, so well introduced here. I love it!

I feel like I need to channel my inner Leo more without being as creepy lmao! I love his character and how he loves what he can't have.

I am also excited that Annabeth has an attraction for Percy; however, unless she grows her hair out, why would Percy ever admit that he liked her? Would Annabeth be the first to make a move? Also, is Percy like one of those kids who gets free tuition for swimming for the school? I would actually love to see Percy be good at school too; maybe not as good as Annabeth, but I think he is an intelligent guy who gets pooped on for academic subjects in most PJO stories.

LMAO Leo WOULD! This was such an unexpected plot twist at the end and I like how Annabeth might have someone like Chiron to confide in. It seems like it would be really tough to be like a girl for 4 years and that it might even mess with your brain so much that you might as well go to the next best architecture school.

Also, is Annabeth just too nervous to be attracted to Percy or does she just not care. Does he like "him"?

I kind of hope you get to the part where Percy realizes Annabeth is a girl soon - I don't know if I can take too much more of Percy just thinking Annabeth is another dude who he goes to school with. I mean I am sure it must be burning you up inside too to see the story just become "Oh look at all these characters from canon Annabeth is meeting!"

I like how much thought you put into Annabeth having to come to this school - it is a huge undertaking on her part in having to dress and act differently and also to lie to everyone in her family. Is Percy going to be like a spoiled kid in this story or is he going to have sad stuff too? I feel like everyone needs a little bit of sad stuff so that they can be relatable.

I also feel like Annabeth is like Rosa Parks in this story - doing something first so that others can follow in her footsteps. Go Annabeth!

I think it is slightly too coincidental that Jason happens to be the first one to meet Annabeth and I also wish that you gave a bit more of a hint when you mentioned that Percy was a "celebrity". I mean, this isn't a real-life story or even very related to canon so I really have no idea what he would be famous for (maybe swimming?)

Also, I feel like Jason would be the kind of guy to play soccer - hot, blonde, and tall :D

No way that Percy is going to be her brother haha! Also, will Percy fall in love with a guy, and then he knows it's a girl who still looks like a guy? I guess, is an attraction about more than just gender?

Amazing

I love this so much! Great writing. When you publish, do tell us. I would love to read more of your works

That's some gourmet shit!

It's my second time through this story, the first was maybe a year ago and It's just as amazing as I remember. Percabeth is otp.

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I love love love love the ending! And all of it! But especially the ending! Actually, I really like the parts where percy doesnt know his roomates is a girl and its all so funny and well written! And nico asking annabeth out, BIGGEST PLOT TWIST since like idk another really big plot twist.

TheBritishBookWorm

Oh my god that sentence in Italian!

Hey goddammit i have a dimple in the middle of my chin too. *pout*