Naruto calling people "humans" makes me cringe.

Well, I guess this is the end of the team 7.

Kitty

Gai-sensei ️‼️

Excellent start.

Never cook again

oh... you had a good story here but of course "this is a darker edgy world!" so you started killing characters for the sake of shock value.

lame

gemna and raido were exhausted coming back to the village after a mission, and they still pushed the sound 4 to second stage.

kakashi is leagues above those 2, he should have easily stomped them.

jfc brother, killing shino and then having the humorous bonus is beyond fucked up. whats wrong with you.

"is that realistic"

I don't know bruh, a couple of ink strokes charged with a fantastic magical energy creates a huge pillar of fire that can lasts for minutes is a thing, on top of all the other wacky gang signs people do and then throw water, eath, wind, fire or lighting out of their body,

are those realistic?

oh brother, sasori fans are gonna be pissed, he didn't just got stomped by yugito, he then gets double tapped in the form of dog food.

rip bozo dogs smoked the sasori pack

this is just misery porn at this point lmao, the story started with such a good idea and premise, then speedran his time with the hyuga and it went to shit lmao.

you managed to make naruto's life better than in canon, but somehow ended up more bitter, hateful and sad than in canon lmao.

what a depressing fanfic man.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT HITOMI IS NOT A PARAGON OF VIRTUE WHO JUST BLINDLY ACCEPTS "OH HINATA IS SPECIAL SHE CAN TAKE CARE OF THE BURDEN SHE CAN HELP NARUTO" BUT HAS DOUBTS LIKE A NORMAL PERSON WOULD BUT IS STILL GOOD ENOUGH TO LET IT PLAY OUT.

I think I had enough...