Reviews for The Honoured Guest
Derick Lewis chapter 73 . 7/25
Thank You for this fanfic. I really enjoyed it! Since made so many fanfiction recommendations I have a few for you War of the Biju: The Fourth Shinobi World War by Son Kenshin, The Uzumaki Tales: Return of the Whirlpool by jbriz, The Element of Time by rasEnshur1KEn, Sealed Legacy by Psycho G, Keibatsu by brown phantom, White by Melkor's Mercy, The Maelstrom Saga by Shadow Legion, 1 Year and 5 Months by Raizen Yusuke, Hyuuga's Downfall by RandRigriae, Naruto: Tamer of the X Antibody by KitsuneDragon, Naruto: Johto Journeys by KitsuneDragon, Avatar The Naruto Chronicles by ChaosMagemon, Hinomori's Apprentice by Kalow, and A New Life in a New Land by NeoKenshin
Hugo0974 chapter 73 . 7/1
Interesting fic, sad that you don't complete it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . . . . . . .
LordHatredX chapter 73 . 6/20
good story,to bad its unfinished

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OdinAsteroid chapter 73 . 5/15
Please continue this :) it's a nice work
Edgar Raul M. Arango chapter 73 . 5/4
I hope you continue with your theory is original.
Edgar Raul M. Arango chapter 1 . 5/4
Thanks for publishing this theory I appreciate it.
nielnica12 chapter 32 . 2/28
This chap is kinda confusing to read
nielnica12 chapter 26 . 2/27
So he’ll be more emo than he currently is? Sigh
nielnica12 chapter 24 . 2/27
Geez this naruto is kinda annoying now. So emo
nielnica12 chapter 19 . 2/27
Kiba x karin eh hehehe ultra rare couple but i dig it
nielnica12 chapter 19 . 2/27
The precious people talk. That’s what was missing eh
nielnica12 chapter 15 . 2/27
This affinity training and the timing of it make more sense than the actual canon. Me like it
nielnica12 chapter 14 . 2/27
Im all in with the fuinjutsu and all but now you added a legendary weapon. I don’t know if i like it.
Guest chapter 38 . 2/22
Your rendition of Hinata lacks a spark, that spark that made her canon character stand out from other shy wallflower characters. Though Canon Hinata is shy and lacks self-esteem, she had made it a point of NEVER GIVE UP (inspired by Naruto of course). It's what makes her work harder, not sit still waiting for a knight in shining armour. It's also what makes the audience hearts throb and empathize and support her. Yes, this is even at 12-13 years old before her slow character growth kicks in.

This story's Hinata is just boring, uninteresting and has nothing inspiring to say. I am nearly tempted to just skip her scenes, it's the most lackluster in the book so far.
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