Reviews for The Honoured Guest
Guest chapter 10 . 1/20
The story sure is interesting but so far, man, this Naruto is miserable. It's tough to accompany him when he's such a cloud of gloom. You'd think he'd be happier having grown up with the Hyuga clan and Hinata but no. I didn't expect him to be happy go lucky good old Naruto but this is almost annoying.
Candice Carter Carter chapter 1 . 10/28/2023
I enjoy the story. Good work on the story.
youhateme chapter 20 . 8/22/2023
I been reading this for the past few days, and really enjoy it. Cant wait to finish. Hope Naruto and Garra can get along.
turnerjordan14 chapter 73 . 7/11/2023
this fic was great i think u made the right decision in leaving it off here the story is huge and would be a big project to continue. You're a great writer and I would hate to see another great story left unfinished because of hate from the community, the stress of having to get a chapter out consistently on time before comments start piling up. amd/or a lack of motivation. boruto sucks and the way they mock/ underpowered our favorite characters is despicable. I'm glad I got to enjoy THG
Guest chapter 73 . 6/25/2023
Amazing story, really enjoyed reading it!
cameronreynolds920 chapter 38 . 6/13/2023
I'm not even in the story and I am terrified of Naruto right now. I can feel the killing intent of Naruto when he releases it.
ivanganev1992 chapter 9 . 5/26/2023
I think it is better to be in different team ,it was not going great anyway with team 7
Jpx0999 chapter 42 . 4/14/2023
she does use some sort of raiton in theses lion firsts of hers
Jpx0999 chapter 40 . 4/14/2023
the moon having effects in the jinchuurikis is a headcannon i will aways cherish

it gives them a more animalistic and inhuman characteristic while also fits perfectly since kaguya is sealed in the moon

my personal headcannon is when in full moon they are aways channeling a small chakra of theyre bijuu constantly due to the bijuu also being affected or connected to it(ex:during full moon narto is AWAYS with slited red pupils and his whisker widen)
Guest chapter 73 . 2/10/2023
kill Sakurawhore
thank you
Danny Williams chapter 73 . 1/24/2023
I liked the story from start to finish.
It had plenty of action, suspense and horror (but also some humor).
At least you finished the story, and left a way for you to create a part 2 of this story.
Now going to try some of your other stories.
Anonymous chapter 14 . 1/13/2023
Sooo... free power-up?
BearGlitch chapter 1 . 1/13/2023
These spelling mistakes hurt
Guest chapter 71 . 1/2/2023
Lol, the only reason you hate Sakura is because she never wanted Naruto's tiny d. You have admitted so yoirself. Gfkysasap, virginloser.
Uzumaki Creed chapter 1 . 12/24/2022
Why is this match so fucking stupid he almost killed hinata he should be bleeding out by now not a little scratch on his palm ….. KILL HIM BEFORE THE FOURTH WAR TAKES HIS LIFE

When sasuke was pulling limbs and slicing heads of the sound nin she jumped on him and hugged him probably saw that as her chance to finally have a romantic scene with the boy but everyone else are monsters yet she’s training to be a ninja

This cat…..

I’m glad you killed kabuto especially the way you gave an old man an honorable death

It’s like neji is making a deal with the devil…. this naruto is crazy! Lol this story has been in my account for years never bothered reading it but I dig it no complaints so far except maybe how the fight between neji and naruto started

Hiruzen is always about sacrifices and the will of fire but his very manipulative and sacrificial of his shinobi as though they are not part of konoha

I thought hinata was learning the rasengan

You just killed shino coz it was the least controversial decision the better of 2 evils I would say

Damn chapter 50 and I’m still in the retrieval arc but I can’t complain since it’s like following the first manga great world building and drama/context

Hahahahaha Sakura has d’illusions I think she’s mental that forehead is so big coz it’s carrying two personalities

Wow choji too I wonder how I’ll explain yourself to the media,and I get your killing of people which will boost most of their training in the time skip which will of course bring them closer and stronger .

I thought he was fire proof?

So hinata is the light naruto chooses and naruto is the darkness hinata loves because she sees it’s struggle,and yet also it’s determination to protect those under its shadow….. quite a concept you got going I’m actually panicking a little because I’m almost at the final chapters

You know most of these uchihas really got manipulated hardcore I cant believe they died with smiles and not an embarrassed blush ,I guess it’s their pride that wouldn’t let them acknowledge they got played like fools.

Kage level chakra reserves and yet he is always tired its worse when you look at the fact he isn’t even using any jutsus …he has fire,wind and lightning affinities. Yet he says sasuke is better at ninjutsu then he is though the boy has 1 affinity 3jutsus in his Arsenal and not much more then we have the fact his stronger then the original canon naruto but still ends up in the same situations as him ….. in other words still relying too much on kurama.

Mxm your fight scenes are boring bro , I guess every author is exceptional in different aspects of writing your world building,character building and story telling is incredible the way you have many elements and still balance them seamlessly is also to notch I just thing your fight are more verbal then detailed…then we have these moments where naruto spares people without much conviction,it’s like you just planned on having them in the story and yet couldn’t use another approach.

Your naruto is getting boring sparing everyone and then making stupid threats like he can actually kill danzo ur story is becoming not predictable but more like disagreeable I thought I could understand you at first but now I’m getting confused . every root operative should die otherwise they will just do it again….

Damn bro you literally leaving this story hanging there is absolutely no closure not in the plot,romance,character build nor rivalry it’s like teen Titans promising season 6 but not delivering
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