|Reviews for The Honoured Guest|
| xxXMr. DarknessXxx chapter 39 . 9/26/2020
Sasuke, you dickbag
| Anon chapter 55 . 9/21/2020
Damn you to all the seven hells
First shino and I was already crying but now chouji my baaaaabiesss
I understand Sasuke probably has to live so the story can continue but honestly I wished naruto would just
Like ok chouji and cia were really out of their minds going outside of konoha without orders etc etc but shino was just innocent man
I shall miss his monotonous speach
And Karin isn't Suzune as I thought, maybe Tayuya? Nhomnhomnhom the mistery continues
This chapter really gave me red wedding vibes, 1am here, reading chapter after chapter, that feeling of dread that something is happening and "no it can't be" but it can and it is, then the despair about what happened, vai se fudeeeeeeer
I just want to rant
| Anon chapter 47 . 9/21/2020
Gods I love it! I LOVE this! Fuck this story is perfect and I still have half of it to read fuck fuck fuck I worship the ground you walk on
But seriously, I love every detail so far, Haruki, Ako, Chie chronicles - which I hope you reveal later that Suzune is Karin - a fucking cat gang wreaking havoc upon konoha
And it's very detail oriented, as Nibi being worshipped as the bakeneko goddess way early and now we discover the reason for it, which of course makes a lot of sense, a huge feral cat/lion made of blue flames? Of course it's viewed as a goddess
I found your work because of Himawari: Hokage for a day but I took some time before I really tried to read, I just thought the summary seemed too cliche at the time but I'm very happy I decided to try it anyway
Anyway I'm quite late to the fandom and to review this, I gathered that this work is complete but I wanted to vent about your sick talent on story telling and character building
It seems a little Sakura and Sasuke bashing but at the same time I can see it happening, especially this chapter where Sasuke challenges Naruto on a duel, like he did at the hospital, but wouldn't explain shit about his reasoning since they don't have that kind of relationship here
And poor Sakura, not even healing yet from her mother's death and danzo's already lurking around to deal the fatal blow
It's very rare for me to like original characters but you made them so real, they are flawed, they have their purpose
Chie still feels without any purpose to Naruto's life, she did help when Hinata was attacked in the arena but that could have been anyone else, it wasn't "reason" enough to create a whole tribe of cats and its culture but I don't care, Chie is the queen, of this story and of konoha, and all shall bow to her awesomeness until the end of times
This story made me actually feel so bad for team 8 of cannon, they are so cool and didn't have much development in naruto, i feel they should have way more space
About Kakashi I feel your critics are well placed, I mean konoha as a whole failed naruto a lot but the guy couldn't even train the son of his teacher properly, and it was his fucking job, not to mention how Sakura was just pushed to the sidelines as well but at least you could say Kakashi didn't have any responsibility to her as he did to Naruto
It upsets me a lot this "all's well that ends well" mentality kishimoto tried to ingrain in Naruto but yeah, what can I do about it
Anyway that's it, I still have to finish reading and usually I would wait until the last chapter to make a comment but I thought that it deserved the compliments as soon as possible
| xxXMr. DarknessXxx chapter 6 . 9/22/2020
Sasuke I really fucking annoying
| Makuro767 chapter 42 . 9/19/2020
You know, this totally go hand in hand with how long it took Original Naruto to reply to Hinata. He has never been loved, always been the one to do the chasing. So being confronted with an emotion that he has never been confronted with, especially being the slow knucklehead that he is, it is a given that he is emotionally stunted.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2020
So Konoha will do nothing in retaliation against Kumo ?
If I was Kumo's leader I would take that as a sign of weakness and press on, after all if Konoha do nothing when I try to abduct the heiress of one of their most powerful clan then they are obviously too weak to do anything and I have nothing to fear. And your explanation that all the villages would somehow allied to attack Kumo if they tried again make no sense why would they help Konoha like that ? Especially Iwa where Konoha is hated ? Like I say, it makes no sense.
| Anon chapter 51 . 8/4/2020
Just finished chapter 51 and man... this chapter hit HARD.
| Yamajiji chapter 73 . 7/20/2020
This turned out to be one of my favorite Naruto fanfics ever. Your writing is fantastic, and the character development of your characters, Naruto and Hinata in particular, is incredible. Im a bit sad you never got around to writing the sequel, but after reading something this good I can’t really complain. Thank you for writing this
| Yamajiji chapter 55 . 7/20/2020
Ayo wtf? You even got poor Choji dude. Fuck. I really respect you, most authors don’t dare kill off characters like you’ve done. And now these guys are fucked.
| Yamajiji chapter 54 . 7/20/2020
You scared me a little with Kiba and Lee, but I’m happy things turned out.
| Yamajiji chapter 52 . 7/20/2020
Shino didn’t deserve that dude. Fuck. I hope Sasuke gets some karma further down the line. I’m thinking Kakashi won’t die from the ambush, and Tayuya will probably spare Sakura. Great chapter as always.
| Yamajiji chapter 51 . 7/20/2020
You are a really good writer. The way you finished off Hiruzen’s character was beautiful. Him being able to say goodbye to everyone, Asuma and Kurenai included, and then sacrificing himself for Naruto was the perfect way for him to go. And on what he said at the end, I can only asume either Obito or Danzo were the ones who interfered during the original sealing.
| Yamajiji chapter 49 . 7/20/2020
Fuck that scene with Asuma and Hiruzen really hit hard. Had me in tears. Great writing.
| Yamajiji chapter 32 . 7/19/2020
Wow. You did something only great authors can do, you made me care about an OC. I even teased up with that last scene with Haruki. I loved the fact that you killed of Kabuto, since he was more of a pest than a good villain. I wonder why Orochimaru would want Hinata, but I guess I’ll just have to wait and see. This is turning into one of my favorite stories here in this website.
| Yamajiji chapter 9 . 7/19/2020
Just started reading this and I have to say, its really good.