Haha, I kinda love when two unrelated intruders run into each other somewhere they really shouldn't be.

Anyway, Naruto has some amazing timing. And Hinata, the poor girl, stands even less of a chance than before. Fan for life

The third Raikage was said to have died facing off against ten thousand shinobi for three days, so I think he probably bit it during the war. But that's a minor detail.

Oh my god that was amazing. I love naruto/asura and it seems like hinatas crush is reborn! This is hilarious and I'd love to read more

Just finished what you have up. This is a nice take on time travel. Naruto seems much more himself then normal, and that makes it 100% better. I can not wait to see what other hijinks he creates. Thank you for writing and sharing.

This is better than your other fanfic, Reading serious fanfics gets troublesome all the time, sometimes these ones are the awesome ones.

I can already guess on why they want to catch Asura. They one-uped him, so naturally he must return the favor and thus starts the war to end all wars, the Prank War ;)

Keep on writing
1Waylander

Hey, so I'm super excited to see the start of this! I loved the Naruto-Kurama interaction at the end, and Naruto botching his description of the Sage. Because of course he would. XD Dummy. And the way that he just shrugs of things of importance like the reincarnation business, because in the end it doesn't really mean anything except that he has more legacy to carry on.

And 'Sometimes, underneath the underneath was a cold and lonely place where thoughts had teeth.' is probably my favourite line in the whole chapter. Really. Wow. And coming from Naruto is a degree of self awareness that he only shows flashes of but is really really important.

Keep up the great work!
Silver Queen

Seems interesting :) I look forward to seeing where this goes!

Neji?! I... I'm not sure I get it.

Oh, wait, not I do! I see, the Kumo thing. Mm, hm.

I do have to wonder why "Asura" went for the split personality impression instead of just creating another clone for Kurama to possess. And oh man, I can't believe Naruto made Kurama do that introduction. It's so... beautiful. Full circle.

Hagoromo was great too. And the white haired asshole. Aaaaaahhhhh! It was all great, I'm sorry I can't explain it better.

To be honest, I always imagined that Kurama would be totally terrible at walking on two feet. So when he tried to possess a human, his first action was to faceplant into the ground because he didn't know how to balance like that.

(And who exactly finishes their stories before publishing them anyway?)