This chapter was very good. I really liked a lot of things about it.

First of all, the biggest surprise was naturally Eva and Geoff. If you see the episode when Trent is singing, you can really see Eva getting emotional about it, so naturally she's a romantic type she's just very afraid to show her emotions other than anger. Geoff on the other hand is a slacker on his own, sure he's a party guy who seems to work out even on his own, but he's got a lot of untapped potential. So, I really see why them being together could be for the best since both would pull the best out of the other. I was really thinking before reading that part: "hmm, who would co-host with them?" Eva was the first that jumped in my head.

Next, Naruto x Dawn I like them as much as a couple as I like Naruto x Bridget, I wouldn't know who is better. The thing about girls is that they can get easily jealous if guys don't treat them as the best. Bridget as we've seen can get pretty jealous, I liked her natural reaction to Naruto and Heather's mock date, she let it go because Heather was his best friend but if she finds out that Dawn is next, she is sure to get pissed at him.

My question is: will Naruto also be taking Gwen on a mock date? And will Naruto ask Gwen for advice on relationships?

The Naruto and Heather scenes were pretty good, Heather is certainly not wasting any chances. :))) I would have really liked to see a reaction after that.
Duncan showing respect for Heather is a first, strange yes, but good nevertheless.

One of the few problems I have with it was pretty much: Jo's elimination and the fact that Gwen didn't appear so often, I know she's going through some hard times but still, in the last part she was pretty much unseen.
Jo's elimination felt a bit too soon but it was pretty fair. She had to do something that she wasn't good at and that cost her.

The next chapter I can't wait. Keep up the great work.

I love how this story is progressing. Awesome chapter like always. Loved the Naruto and Dawn moment I wonder if Bridgett is ever going to say something to Naruto about what is bothering her and about what Heather said.

quite an interesting chapter

Great chapter. I can't wait for more. Although, I think Rodney would be more of a stuttering mess like on the canon. Then again, this is new, so I'm fine with it.

Darn, no Jasmine.(Sighs) Well maybe she will be a new contestant on Total Drama World Tour.

Oh no! Not like on purpose. I meant if like someone found out he knew and everyone confronts him about it. Like how Courtney found out he helped DJ with Bunny.

I don't see why Bridgette doesn't talk to Naruto if what Heather told her is bothering her. I mean they are boyfriend and girlfriend.

another great chapter as always man and keep it up. think you should add on more stuff to the story like more movie genre's like Comedy, Romantic Comedy and some other stuff that they left out in the show. did like the add on challenge of the Romantic Tragedy movie and it went great. love of what came up and of the 'mock' date stuff that things will get interesting on what will occur. have no clue who the stalker is since the person's name starts with 'M' now since you dropped it and don't know who it could be. still can't wait for what is to come for the story

oooookeeeey ,round em up boys its time for a FEEL trip . Hurray for the naruto/dawn moment, i like her alot , among the characters shes one of my favorites for her nice personality. I wonder how was everyone's reaction to the scene, if naruto didint had alot of fan girls before now he certainly has , made the world cry openly after that scene if chief was anything to go by .

Not many people in the TD with names rhat start with M , but i guess she must be from the naruto universe or the cartoonetwork in general , hard to pinpoint , ima think it later when i cross down them down.

Another great chapter , keep it up , tho i must prepair myself for the FEELS , for they hit me like a truck

The Geoff and Eva pairing shocked me but I kinda like it.
Will Naruto always get jumped by the girls? I don't think he'd complain though. Good looking girls jumping to make out with you. Heather helping out Dawn to get a mach date with Naruto was sweet of her by the way. I mean even mean girls have a soft side they show certain people and those people can often warm and soften their cold, hard hearts.
I just really like how things progress. Not an instant couple type of thing but a real relationship being built and some romantic feelings developing as well as different types of bonds. And the love pentagon with Naruto in the center is funny. I wonder how you'll spin it to make it work.
by the way that corn cob prank made an idea for a prank pop into my head. It involves peanut butter, jelly(any kind will do really, even honey works), and rope. Sounds kinda kinky now that I wrote it out and read it.

wow this got more interesting i wonder what will happen next

i didn't care before BUT now you got me. WILL we get the FULL flashback on how Naruto got that scar and the name of the person who gave it to him

Ok first love it great work love the fear naruto can dish out. second u had trent listed as a killer grip not as an eliminated. Third love the eva and Geoff romance eva never got enough sceen time during the real show glad to see get written seens can't wait to see her react to blaineley. Next was narutos stalker Madara, minato, mei, or am I in the wrong box. again great work can't wait for more

sorry dind read the M from chapter 10

is it an oc of yor cration or is she from cartoonetwork i will say Mindy or mandy ... no in cant be Blaineley could it pm if i am right or wrong though