Reviews for What a Dramatic Life
DCMatriXHunter chapter 5 . 9/15/2014
Loved this chapter. It had plenty of humor and Naruto got kissed 6 times by 4 different girls.

And Chris is coming around to the fact that Naruto is his son.

Great chapter. This is the best Naruto/Total Drama crossover that exists so far. Great story. Just amazing and each chapter never disappoints.
DarkShadowRaven chapter 4 . 9/9/2014
This chapter was... :)) awesome.

I really liked most of everything about it. Yes, this is much better in most ways, it could have been a bit better if there were more surprises and unexpected results though.

The dance parts were great, the execution good and so on...

One of the things I feel is unnecessary is that Naruto is Chris's kid, I don't see it as being all that necessary. To the original Chris he couldn't even take care of a plant right, so now if it turns out that he has a kid, I don't see how Naruto would fit in Chris's world. Sure there may be some funny scenes but I'm not sure what can happen in the long run.

One question I do have is if Naruto will be in other relationships with girls. Like ok, now he's deciding between Bridget and Heather. But will they separate between the seasons for some reason or the other and start fresh on the next season? O maybe in the middle of the seasons?
I'm asking because I think it would be interesting if he built that kind of relationship tower or try to make it happen. Sure some times it can be a goal others it could be a duds.
naruto-phenex chapter 4 . 9/8/2014
muito bom continua
shadespace chapter 4 . 9/7/2014
I LOVED it man great chapter. cody needs some loving man. harold as the bad guy i saw coming dude is nasty and people will try to get him to stop and he won't listen so they prank him, duncan and naruto , and he will try to destory them so yeah i agree with that choice. now chris being naruto's father i picked up on the clues brfore you have it revealed to chris. i like that cause chris and naruto kind of act alike in some ways. how long will he put it off for is the question. and when he does accept it will he be a loving father or will he a one of those douch bags that just put up with the kid til he is 18, i feel that chris will be former rather then the later and will be a great father to naruto, and probably try and goa ll jiyraiya on naruto about having 3 girls wanting to date him
Jebest4781 chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
This was a great chapter man and it turned out great on the details laid out. With Chris and Naruto well thinking it would be best if they just respect each other so things won't get complicated on further events
Ryuzaki-XJ-9 chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
This is awesome I wish I didnt have to go to work for another 16 hours and read some more oh well (sighs) Keep up the great work.
coldblue chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
Great chapter and thanks for updating.

The time it took to make this chapter:

If it takes 1-2 weeks to update a chapter go for it. Like a lot of the reviewers have written, you have made the best "Naruto"/"Total Drama series" so far. I really can't think anyone got this far or has been as creative as you have. So congratulations! :)

Chris McLain knowing Naruto is his kid and going into denial:

Love it! It seems like knowing that even though Naruto M. Uzumaki is his kid by the Sticky notes and now trying to do a DNA test with Naruto and his to prove it wrong. Yep, that a strong case of denial. Suprisingly, Naruto have Chris have a lot in common and think similarly. Sometimes Naruto guess what Snarky comments Chris makes or the reason why he on the Challenge. Nice job with Chris McLain knowing Japanese, which add's another clue to Chris McLain and Kushina Uzumaki past history they had. It will probably be around "Total Drama Action" or when that starts that Chris will have to accept Naruto as his Biological Son. Naruto strangely pretty cool with everything so far.

Harold being a Villain in this chapter:

Nice! Sure, Harold is not a bad guy in "Total Drama Series", but he can get very annoying, crude and just be a know it all. Not bad with how Harold got Courtney and Naruto off with ringing the Votes, BUT Harold did not count on Naruto coming back and with VENGENCE! Poor Harold got rejected by Leshawna, BUT that is by far the WORST pairing idea ever.

Naruto with Bridget and Heather in this chapter:

I have to admit I like the trust and closeness in this chapter. With Naruto and Heather we find out that they went to almost every dance together and loved to dance with one another. With Naruto and Bridget their was a lot of trust and closeness with each other in this chapter. The campers are making Side Bets to see who dances with who first, but the pairing Poll still open and is the MAIN prize. Naruto saw Heather boobs, while Naruto was very truthful and paid attention to Bridget when answering her questions about Poems.

It looks Naruto has to worry about Heather, Bridgett and Izzy fighting over spending time with him now. Poor, clueless, and lucky Naruto.

Nice jobs with the Challenges. "Running Man" was probably the highlight and showed that Heather actually loves that show. Naruto was a excellent Hunter.

Naruto dealing with Chief Boot Camp, Extreme, Running Man/Name Tag, Cooking and Trust Challenges. That like 5 to 6 episodes out of "Total Drama Island", while adding your OWN Originality to the story.

Poor Chief is going soft, but I admire how he can control his body to point to FORCE tears back in his eye. XD!


1) Will Chris McLain act differently during in "What a Dramatic Life", with Naruto dropping such a Bomb on him? Will Chief, the Campers or worst the Media find out about Chris McLain being Naruto M. Uzumaki biological Father/Son?

2) Will we finally have Heather, Bridgett and Izzy have a sit down on their DEBATE/Battle over who gets Naruto? Will they compromise or fight each other over it?

3) What do you mean by possible Lemon's in this story? Are we talking/writing Graphic or more Suggestive theme style of writing?

4) Finally, will it take 2 or 3 more Chapters to finish the "Total Drama Island" Arc/Season?


1) Even with Chris McLain as a good actor people will know that he acting off. By that I mean Chief and maybe some Campers. Maybe Chris will space out and take glances at Naruto trying to DENY in his head he Naruto is his Son, BUT notice Kushina and his personalities/traits that are similar to his and Kushina Uzumaki.

I would love at the END of "Total Drama Island" that it gets out Chris McLain has a son and that it is ONE of the "Total Dram Island/Action/World Tour" Campers/Contestant bring MORE drama to Chris McLain life and have the Campers guessing. Like some crazy Stalker Photographer/Media fan of Chris McLain that just makes Celebrities live difficult by revealing this information.

Though, Naruto won't say anything to anyone UNTIL Chris McLain actually accepts that and it becomes public Knowledge.

2) I just want to read SIT DOWN with Heather, Bridgett and Izzy fighting over their claim over Naruto. Maybe some ground rules. I could read Heather and Bridgett having a SIT DOWN in the cafeteria by themselves and Izzy crashing in to stake HER claim over her Whiskers.

True, it would be awesome to read a Cat Fight, BUT that still needs more build up and I love to read how Heather, Bridgett and Izzy debate over WHO has the right to claim Naruto as their own Boyfriend.

I love Harem/Sing Pairing. Really, the Harem would be small with Heather, Bridgett and Izzy being with Naruto, BUT I like to read how this story goes.

3) I don't want you to get in trouble a the Fan Fiction site managers delete your story. Really, I love Lemons as much as the NEXT Guy/Girl/Person, but I don't want your story deleted.

That why I suggest you write 'Suggestive Theme Lemons'. Like image the boys and girl campers walking in the room and one of them says, "What smells like fear, excitement and lust?" Sort of a "Family Guy" joke their.

Your could have Naruto with Heather, Bridgett or Izzy coming out of room in a hurry with their cloths messed up. Maybe Naruto with either Heather, Bridgett or Izzy accidently leaving PARTS of their cloths in the room.

Hell! Just some the campers hearing some Rocking, panting and just yelling, "Finish up already! I'm trying to SLEEP!" Maybe Naruto gives the Campers/Constestants some Ear Plugs to block out sound at night saying to block out each other sound, BUT really so they don't hear what Naruto doing with either Heather, Bridgett or Izzy.

Let hope he or the girls avoid the Cameras. :D

4) Yeah. Either 2 to 3 Chapters will finish the "Total Dram Island" series/arc. Maybe 4 chapters, BUT this is all just guess. You really have a surprisingly good pace for "What a Dramatic Life" and it definitely the BETTER Crossover stories of "Naruto"/"Total Drama series".

Keep up the good work and thank you for updating!
Alex M chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
lol love it keep up the good work.
DCMatriXHunter chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
Loved this chapter. This is the BEST Naruto/Total drama crossover on this site and this chapter just helps prove it. Amazing.
nightmaster000 chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
Another awesome chapter.

Loved the part where Naruto saw Heathers boobs. That scene has me wondering something. Will there be any lemons in this story.

Interesting twist making Harold a villain.

So Chris is Naruto father. How will he with the revelation when he get's proof it's true? How will the other campers especially the girl's that have feelings for Naruto react when they find out?
EMoney365 chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
Naruto's the son of Chris McLean?, Pipebomb.
HaretaSora chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
Great cute little story XD it is amazing, i love it all XD i love the relationship between Naruto and Heather as childhood friends, Love dense Naruto with Bridgette, love crazy Izzy lovin on Naruto. Love everything about this story :D i'm curious who Naruto's 'stalker' was, will we hear about it later?
Cant wait until the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work! :D
Kaore Ryu chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
I guessed that Naruto was Chris's son near the begining of the chapter.
White fox16 chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
I loved this one it was really good. Also to answer your question google translate isn't always right when using multiple sentece's. But I think it might be right.
pensuka chapter 4 . 9/6/2014
ok now this is going to be interesting and my deduction was right chris knows japanese and the reaction to narutos last name which increases proof that naruto is chris's son and if i am right which i would be due to the clues there i get to see a funny reaction of the campers when they find out that chris is naruto's father
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