Wow, this was exactly what I was looking for, a great Naruto / Total Drama story. I like everything about it, I like that you know that Naruto will change the timeline. Sure, anything can happen, Naruto could have crushes or end relationships even for stupid reasons.

Great story so far, I can't wait for more.

Great start.

I like the twist in making Naruto Heathers childhood friend.

For the pairing i'm hoping you go the harem route.

Nice.

I like it but please for the harem include eva I have yet to see a naruto with eva in general so come on add eva to the harem please. :) but beside pestering you about eva. great work also love the naruto weakess way to funny :) keep up the great work

great fic
everything was well written
pls continue and update soon

Ok so far things look cool. I will say you can work on your grammar and such. Plus I did see some missing words, but beyond that I think you did a good job.

I'm hoping for harem and think Bridgette would be a good starter. Can lead to some humor over Heather getting jealous.

go with a harem

Thursday August 14, 2014.

This is interesting.