Don't know how many times i have read this, but one thing for sure it's one of the best fanfiction i read ever. Sure you have a lot of problem with grammars. But hey, nobody's perfect. I'm looking for your next fic :)

Love this story man. Read it two times and it was awesome.

Golden Spade and Laughing Jack sound like cool names to me.

seriously what is the corncob prank?

Whenever I read Naruto and Dawn's love scene, I imagine the beginning of "I Won't See You Tonight Part 1" (from timestamp 0:00 to ~1:11, with the piano being replaced by drums, guitar and bass when the tree starts to grow, all of this happening in the background)

I liked the epilogue!

This was a really great story to read. I enjoyed very much and I liked the epilogue. Especially the last scene that you wrote out. I hope you continue to make more great stories after you return from your trip

OMG I was thinking just bring in Maury for the test lol.
Thanks for the meal.
Keep Up The Good Work!

Thanks for the meal.
Keep Up The Good Work!

buen capitulo sobre todo la confrontación de naruto contra misa ademas del embarazo de gwen se hizo publico

exelente historia sobre todo las parejas y el origen de naruto

I enjoyed the story and I am glad you didn't make Naruto overpowered and win every single time. You did give me a lot of surprises with the different challenges and eliminations. My only complaint the name tag challenge was a bit repetitive but, still the humor over how repetitive it is made up for it. Good work on the story.

Awww When Izzy was Smart you should have broke the 4th wall

Wow. That's really all I can say as this has become one of my favorite stories on this site. I only wish I found it sooner. Good job and thank you for this incredible tale.

want to know if gaia and ward is an authentic story