I loved it! I don't like Eiri being so cold with Shu, but deep inside he's so lovely and kind! Thanks for this chapter :D

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! i want moooooooooooooore, i got such feels...such feels. this has been one of the best fanfics i have read. thank you for writing this

Yuki doesn't have blue eyes, they're golden brown. Also, in dialog, at the end of a sentence the punctuation doesn't come after quotation marks but before. So: ("You're safe now, everything's been taken care of".) is wrong, it should be: ("You're safe now, everything's been taken care of.")

Loved the ending it was so sappy. I really wanted to squee.

Aw, they are so cute together!

I loved this story so much!

Sweet babies being sweet babies! Eeeeeee! They're so cute, I can't handle this. I'm really glad Shuichi's alright :)

..., HOLY CRAP! They just murdered him. I knew those two we're crazy. I loved it. I'm so glad they did that tho.
Keep updating I really like the story.

Wow. Eiri really meant it when he said the offender would pay. Bye bye Hiroaki now maybe Shuichi will be safe!

I love this story so much!

Eiri and Shuichi never fail to break my heart... This characters are just so lovable. And your writing is just making me more and more attached to them. Poor Shuichi... I'm glad he has Eiri to protect him. I really loved this story, even though it almost brought me to tears

Aw, poor Shuichi. Eiri is so sweet, the way he always take care of the man he loves. They are so cute together! I love this pairing!

Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!