Reviews for The Day The Dursleys Came To Hogwarts
Incantations7 chapter 7 . 6/27/2024
As much as I was hoping that this wasn’t a crack fic, it’s definitely starting to go down the crack rabbit hole…
Steve Cell chapter 16 . 5/8/2024
Loving the story andLoved your authors notes in chapter 16
Guest chapter 22 . 5/6/2024
It's going to be... interesting to see the reactions there. I imagine that there's more than just 'Harry is an adult' to derail it.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/6/2024
Dumbledore: "Giving away material to appease an offense? Nonsense! How you do that is you insult them harder, and they give you everything you want. What do you meant this makes enemies? Nothing a little compulsions can't fix!"

I know this is already fully written, but I hope that when Albus and Snape get their proper 'rewards', Snape being a greedy bastard here also plays into it. Maybe him paying the value of what Albus was so upset at being 'given away needlessly'. After all, it IS Snape's fault it had to be done in the first place. Just tack it on to what Albus stole.
Guest chapter 27 . 11/5/2023
What are your thoughts on the matter? Let me hear your ideas

The abomination is dumb because you didn't add any context to make it plausible. You just dropped off like a dump truck dropping it's load. All we have to judge it by is canon magic and setting. In that context it's dumb. You could have made it believable by making clear changes to canon before you revealed it but you didn't do that.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/4/2023
"It was Hermione that figured it all out," Harry happily praised. "She's the brightest witch of her generation."

Do you realize how awkward that would be if he kept running around saying that so much? That's not even getting into how much it would piss off all the other witches who just maybe don't agree she's the smartest witch of her age?
Guest chapter 18 . 8/11/2023
wow! surprise at chapter end is right. Wow! story continues to be fantastic,
not able to put this down, must finish tonight
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2023
Loving this, redemption activities for both Petunia and Winky. Loving the twists.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/11/2023
Lady Ravenclaw! this story keeps getting better and better
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 34 . 8/6/2023
Awesome story even the 2nd time through! Thanks for sharing!
Vates Despero chapter 5 . 7/21/2023
{"Professor McGonagall explained it to me," she went on quietly. "Said that your aunt had somehow found something she called dampening rods that had been sticking out of your spine. Five of them. Somehow they existed on a metaphysical level and had been severely lessening the amount of magic that could be in your magical core." She took another sip before putting it back on the bedside table. "Once they were removed, magic began rushing in to fill the void, even more so when you started doing Merlin-level magic during your Task."}

Seven. There were SEVEN black rods in his spine dampening his magical core, see quote below for the chapter 1 paragraph in question. Seven would be a 40% stronger effect than five, which is kind of a significant difference... in addition to the whole 'lack of internal consistency' thing.

{As the search continued, Petunia had discovered another red rod on the other side of his head and quickly removed it. On a further examination, she found seven black rods sticking out of his spine. These, McGonagall informed, dampened a person magical core. As each black rod were removed, a sudden influx of magical energy would flood back into Harry to fill the void that had been there, making him jump slightly in his seat. There were also seven blue rods that surrounded his heart that McGonagall said diminished his ability to recognize love.}
nif-ravenpuff chapter 34 . 5/24/2023
Hands down one of the most clever FFN stories I’ve read! My only different opinion is on the terrorism thing. DEs might be considered equivalent to Nazis who conducted their prejudiced terror activities while holding the position of power, but the squib group in this story is not “better than” the IRA or Islamic groups, all of which could be described as targeting weaknesses as a backlash to oppression. I would not have lightened their sentences.
Windy chapter 1 . 5/5/2023
Holly hell! It's great!
Guest chapter 34 . 4/19/2023
Lavender Dursley, Dudley Bones
Guest chapter 8 . 3/13/2023
Magic used by Madam Pomfrey vanished the urine and feces while still in the body

this did NOT need mentioning, you autismal fuck
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