Chapter was too short!

Wow, beyond the call of duty lemonade, too many lemons

AWESOME!:D

Sealed mid rant! Lol that unsealing is gonna be fun! Thank you for the story!

Haha! Yes! Time to wreck MBI! And great reference to HSUA! TFS and Takahata are great!

Well, this is a better crossover than in DC, considering there are a lot of waifus, but I'm still waiting for "High School DXD", plus Naruto's unhealthy need to have sisters is too limiting in SMUT scenes. Furthermore, this main romance feels unstable, as it moves between Xanna's ambitions as an entity with over 3,000 years of experience with someone barely 30 years old making her feel like a manufactured dependent couple that surpasses even incest of mother and son or falling in love with a robot she knows because she created it, the disparity of influence or power between Xanna and Naruto, contradictions of contempt for humanity, the "domination" of the intergalactic empire for the good of others, etc. This romance is too similar to relationships that are united by the belief that "opposites attract" until sooner or later they separate...Finally, although the depth of the plot is great, which can become quite serious at times, it becomes illogical when in the end everything is resolved with someone being "hypocritical" and not allowing empathy or agreeing with any side 100% ... (T_T)

So...who were the 6 Ashikabi? Minato/Yukari/Chiho were a given, but who were the other 3? It's never directly confirmed if charecters were or weren't going. Further confusing things is that Takami is a potential Ashikabi, so was she counted amongst the 6?

Love your rant about religious reviews, the world would be a better place if the right to free speach required passing an I.Q test.

Keep in mind Minato never had a positive male role model his whole life from birth and was constantly having his opinions on anything be ruthlessly stomped out of him throughout that whole time. Yes he’s a wimp but it’s not entirely his fault and having everyone seem to dislike him or not want to give him the time of day or a chance because of it is very demoralizing.

Love it

Love the omake:)

Ya lo leei completo y es muy bueno, es uno de los pocos fics que diría que le quedaría un reading, para ver las reacciones de los personajes de sekirei y solo sekirei

10/10, creo que ya leí esto como 10 veces
oye, deberias mandar a Naruto, Xanna y Akitsu al mundo de Bleach
Bleach esta realmente remontando con su nueva temporada

Amazing end to the story. I love ruthless Naruto always.

I missed his ruthless streak too. It's good to see it back with a vengeance. I hope he stays that brutal forever lol. It was one of the things I missed from these following parts that was in the first part.