Ya lo leei completo y es muy bueno, es uno de los pocos fics que diría que le quedaría un reading, para ver las reacciones de los personajes de sekirei y solo sekirei

10/10, creo que ya leí esto como 10 veces
oye, deberias mandar a Naruto, Xanna y Akitsu al mundo de Bleach
Bleach esta realmente remontando con su nueva temporada

Amazing end to the story. I love ruthless Naruto always.

I missed his ruthless streak too. It's good to see it back with a vengeance. I hope he stays that brutal forever lol. It was one of the things I missed from these following parts that was in the first part.

I love the personalities of Naruto and Xanna. I hope you will continue writing more sequels for this. The fact that it is more humourous than plot doesn't bother me. In fact, it is welcomed. the first part had a plot and it made me care about them, which is enough. These are great fun to read with just enough plot to keep them interesting.

Honestly I'm Christian myself and I found the Christian ones hilarious! Also in one of ur omakes u pointed out something I have been saying for yrs in the what about the Muslim extremists. The fact that alot of the religions that are still around with one God being worshiped or almost identical. with all under umbrella of Christianity (Jews, Catholic, Islamic, Mormon, ECT.) and Muslim having near identical teachings (granted there are a few major and minor differences. such as the clear sexist undertones in one as well as how the afterlifease depicted, but they all also have someone who is referred to as their savior or a son of their god. The Mahdi for Muslims(at least I believe I remember that right) , and Jesus for Christianity. There for the way I see it they should technically also pull under that umbrella no matter how much they seem to not like Christianity.

Damn son
You write character interactions really well.

I enjoyed your stories but Im still irritated by how much you attacked my religion. Im pretty sure you spent more time attacking Islam than other religions and I hated it.
Just letting you know.
I’m not threatening you by the way.

If anything I thought Naruto would support the Islamic concept of heavenly virgins

im enjoying the story but mindreading abilities make things a little too easy and boring.

i just started THIS one and i have to say... YAY

Very nice sequel.

That was hot. Isn't this like, the first actual 3some with Xanna? Not to mention inseki as well... Hot... Very hot.

That Pastafarianism skit was honestly awesome.

I got plenty of chuckles out of it, mainly just picturing it and lip-syncing along with Naruto as I read his story. Even if it is an omake, it's still hilarious.

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