Hahaha haihane is an mk fan. Xanna is such a hypocrite lulz. Nice, sword art online got nothing on Naruto's castle stage haha. Bwhaha getting a fucking sword that is strong against an enemy, after you kill the enemy... love it when that happens -.-' Naruto is the best hahah he made real potions. Poor haihane, she woulda love to come along. Love when there is a simple answer to getting through a tough boss, that will teach her to think before she tries to kill everything.

Yay, they gonna save yashima. You have such a way with words my friend "an orgy of blood" bwahaha. Bwhahaa akitsu is the best. Minaka you done gone & fucked up. Poor miya if she lets those demons in XD. Aww he can't wing the sekirei, that sucks since even if bastardized winging is a pretty big deal to them. Hhaha takami, she'll be back.

Aww poor akitsu, what if that was a random psycho that wanted to peel her skin and wear her as body suit U.U gaah akitsu is so over sexualized that I can't picture her saying onii-chan hahaa. Makes me cringe. I swear... you better give him kuu-chan if you going with that little sister fetish. She is the only real little sister type sekirei. Gaaah baka Naruto almost melted his new little sister. Bwhaha I feel bad for minaka. Aww akitsu getting corrupted by xanna.

I am disapointed by your bashing of religious figures when you are quite a good writer. You could be helping decrease stereotyping hate but increase it instead.
Disappointing.

Science obsessed morons who state that things can be proven are the stupid atheists.

One last huzzah huh? It caught me off guard when Naruto pushed him out the window but then I could not stop laughing at the casualness. For a second I honestly thought Naruto was going to help him. Nope! LOL.

(P.S. this whole story has made me feel so sorry for Takami.)

great sequel to your last story.

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So
Mutsu stays behind?
But his children won't have super powers.
I hope him and his 'little brother' can keep his existence secret.
They probably won't be able to.
As Tokyo will be swarmed by intelligence gatherers and Mutsu must be somewhat known for he is one of the oldest of sekirei.
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There will be much torture in his future.
Sad life.

That last scene could have been better.
They could have been doing it in Miya's bedroom.

I laugh at your cliffhangers.
Mostly because the story is finished already.

About atheism.
It doesn't exist.
Either atheists believe in 'science' or 'living healthily' or 'capitalism' or 'dedicating as much time as possible to fanfiction'.
I believe people need something to believe in or they get suicidal.

News reports in the middle east report cultists of the Boob God to be battling cultists from the Muslims.

In the background cries can be heard:
'Boobs for the Boob God!'
'Beards for the Beard God!'
'... IT'S NOT THE BEARD GOD YOU IDIOTS IT IS GOD, JUST GOD!'

There IS something kind of refreshing about someone who isn't... I guess 'a hater' sums it up... Being so unapologetically politically incorrect. I could get into a whole essay-length post of musing about the effects of racism on the so-called majority and on society as a whole, but I get the idea you know it all, and also this is a review.
Anyway, I do quite like this so far. I got into it because I was looking for empire building fics, but it seemed stupid to start on the last fic of the series. Anyway, cheers, and have some kudosauce.

its been a very enjoyable read, normally i stop reading fics longer then 2-300k in the middle as they get bogged down in the plot and the humor goes stale, but this set has been a remarkable exception so far, which i hope the next one continues in this trend

wow, naruto's found someone he didnt want to "practice" with, thats an acheivment all of its own