Reviews for Sekirei? Is that some new species of little sister?
AnthonyR89 chapter 8 . 8/13/2019
noticed a repeated typo in this chapter. mainly, you using "payed" rather than "paid". i googled it just to be sure, and "payed" is only used in regards to a ship.
TheGreatBubbaJ chapter 16 . 8/9/2019
Good times, fun little OCs with the bellhops.
Seraphy64 chapter 16 . 7/7/2019
Despite not know anything about sekirei and having to Google every character as they were introduced and a lot of terms, this series continues to be awesome. I was in tears for a lot of it. Seriously impressive. My favourite parts were thr forced D&D runs.
Zerak chapter 16 . 6/26/2019
Honestly I really enjoyed this fanfic, granted the plot wasn’t as deep as the first one (naruto one) but it was still very enjoyable to read.

Sometimes it’s just fun to read something that’s just funny and entertaining instead of having an amazing story being the main focus, not saying the plot for this isn’t good it was much better than the one in the DC universe since it is easier to actually meld your characters into the plot when there is a plot.

I specially liked the D&D parts, to came out of nowhere and that made it fit the story even more.

Nice touch there at the end, pushing him out the window.
marcinkrycki2314 chapter 6 . 6/14/2019
Pfff that interdimensional storage locker instantly made me remember kane chronicles books.
A-Lysdove63 chapter 16 . 6/1/2019
Hilarious and Fabulous as always. While I have seen sekirei briefly I was able to understand it...mostly. though I will be honest to the fact that I have begun to skim some of the inner monologues of the characters I was not that familiar with. So this one was a little harder to hold my attention but was still fun to read and made me laugh and smile none the less. I look forward to your next Story.
A.
Autobot-Wolfsketch chapter 16 . 5/31/2019
This was a great story I really enjoyed it very much and it made me laugh.
Thoughtful Bean chapter 16 . 5/22/2019
A review
pwtcmcneil chapter 9 . 4/26/2019
boobs for the boob god. cunts for the cunt throne

(sorry, couldn't resist after the omake and 40k references)
pwtcmcneil chapter 7 . 4/26/2019
when ever i think of naruto, i think of DBZ tien's or goku's muscles
Sypho Dias chapter 16 . 4/12/2019
This was an awesome story man! Gg! Cant wait to read the next one. Its gonna be awesome! Hope for a fifth sequel too!
Sypho Dias chapter 14 . 4/12/2019
Oh come on! Some of us are looking forward for the porn so dont you dare keep it at a minimum!
Sypho Dias chapter 11 . 4/11/2019
What lemons?! We havent had a good long one in ages! Love the omake though. Hope you continue it next chapter!
Sypho Dias chapter 10 . 4/11/2019
Uhh dude i m buddhist and all but... What the hell is dalai lama? Never heard of it... Well its not in SL so... India? Whatever... Love the omakes.
Sypho Dias chapter 8 . 4/11/2019
LMAO! That last part was sooo funny. It was awesome!
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