Reviews for Harry Potter and the Avenging Iron Wizard |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is good please come back soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a huge issue with this chapter. I get that some of the supplies he might not be able to get or would be better to wait until he was in the UK, but why couldn't he do the majority, if not all of his shopping while in the US? It's not like Diagon Alley is the only magical shopping district in the world and we know for a fact that non-magical money can be converted into magical money otherwise how else would first gen magicals be able to buy stuff? The school list is sent with the Hogwarts letters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just Listen to this the whole time. watch?v0vhfEgQVDAc |
![]() ![]() ![]() He So TOXIC XD |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. Are you going to continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite possibly one of the worst fics I’ve read. First chapter is a horribly rushed introduction, a spoiled, hypocritical, chauvinistic protagonist, and you write these characters as if they are adults and not ELEVEN. The time period is extremely confusing with advanced technology and yet Hermione has a Walkman. Extreme character bashing and contract cliches. And may I reiterate with kitty and Harry- they are ELEVEN. As in they just graduated elementary school. Why are they acting like their world is ending just because he’s going to a school in England which clearly she knew about since apparently statute of secrecy doesn’t apply in America I guess. Tl;dr a terrible and boring fic that’s just a bunch of cliches and bad writing held together by hot glue and prayers |
![]() ![]() ![]() You could have harry have two wives one for each name Stark for Kitty and Potter for Daphne |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been a year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seriously need someone to review your chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somehow I see the character of Harry Potter being developed more of as a cross between Tony Stark and Draco Malfoy... it would be better if he wasn’t so obnoxious all the time. Even then, good fic. Hope you continue it |
![]() ![]() Just an FYI for you: Harry's guards should have PRECEDED him into the floo, else they weren't doing their jobs! Good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue one day I want to know what happens next. Especially 5th year if it happens with a confrontation with the Toad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome job on this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First time reading it, just one question: did you have an editor for this chapter? |