Reviews for Glamours
Guest chapter 22 . 9/14/2019
This was an awesome story. I really hope there's a few chapters and an Epilogue, though. I want to know if she has a family. If so, does she have kids with a demigod or shadowhunter. And does she choose to be with one or the other or both? Please update. I'm dying to know and read more of this story.
-Yours in all Fangirlness,
AACM25 chapter 13 . 5/2/2017
ok jason and piper should already be in their 20s, but "best warriors in this planet", i don't know about that, and he should certainly not be able to make that claim seeing as he has never seen a shadowhunter fight.
AACM25 chapter 10 . 5/2/2017
great story, but by this time, ill say percy would be kind of a legend(real life legend) among demigods, i mean look how everything went after percy went missing for only 6 days, even the hunters where looking for him, or that little girl at camp jupiter, "when i grow up i want to be percy jackson" i just feel its kinda been downplayed for the moment, the same can be said about the wars, as much as it was said was like: yeah there was a war, and that it.
Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 22 . 10/10/2016
It's been ten months. Almost a year. I take it this is abandoned, in that case. Pity. It's a great story, but if you don't want to write it anymore then don't write it. If you want to do original stories, I suggest you could use FictionPress. Do you have an account there? If so, I would like to check out some of your stories there.
Good luck with life after high school! I've got a year or two left until then.
Aviendha Aviendha Aviendha chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
Wow ... that's a really good description of ADHD. That's how I feel, like, my entire life. Math homework is a nightmare, even though I personally find it easy.
ThePointer chapter 22 . 4/23/2016
If you publish a book for real please put it on your profile. I promise I will read it no matter WHAT it is about ASAP. You are an amazing writer and I wish the best for you and your life.
Demihunter0014 chapter 21 . 4/23/2016
I am so upset to see the end though. I almost wish there was some kind of sequel like with PJO to HoO...
I know that won't happen tough. Great chapter
ThePointer chapter 7 . 4/21/2016
I have to say I am not a fan of Apollo…
Oh gods don't kill me... Everyone. So starry to hear about the terrorist thing though. I know how that is. Last year there was a bomb threatening at a school in my district a couple minutes away from mine. Police I was in a school play that was there around that time so everyone was freaking out.
I hope that at the battle Alyssa sees the shadowhunters so she can join them together.
ThePointer chapter 6 . 4/21/2016
Ugh you haven't given ANY clues as to what her godly parent is. I think. I am NOT a good guesser. I thought maybe Zues because the Pegasus scene went on for a while. It could be Apollo but this kind of character seems like the person who can do AMAZING things (besides sitting on the side and healing people) I just think it will be like an underdog to a hero kind of thing… I don't know… it could be Hades because of the feeling alone kid of thing… I have no idea! Guess I just have to go to the next chapter which if I had to guess is her talking with someone, capture the flag, or her trying to figure it out then get claimed. You would think she would have been claimed already with the whole promise the gods made and everything…
Whatever. Great Story!
ThePointer chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
I immediately hate her friends. They think down on her and treat her poorly. UGH I HATE THEM SO MUCH. I'm surprised Alyssa hasent punched them already... I would.
ThePointer chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
Ok I am writing this after the first paragraph. I think. She should get help from Tris.
Pallathene chapter 20 . 1/23/2016
i luv ur story. pls write the next chapter 't wait to see what happens next. :D
Pallathene chapter 1 . 1/23/2016
Your writing is awesome
Guest chapter 13 . 1/1/2016
Piper and Jason! Please incorporate the 7! But don't make them overpower the current characters, I like the direction this is going!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/1/2016
I love your story its so cool!
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