Reviews for put on your warpaint
magicofantasy chapter 16 . 2/10/2021
Is this the end?
..please at least make another character
NinjaDucks chapter 9 . 7/20/2020
I came across your fic not even two days ago and I am just IN LOVE! Beautifully written, the dialogue and world building all feel so genuine and REAL. I haven’t been this giddy and stressed about a fanfic or any book really in SO LONG. This fanfic is such a GIFT. Chapter 9 especially had me reading and pausing and reading and pausing cause I was SO STRESSED. This is entire thing is a masterpiece. Just bless you omg
kawaiihinahime chapter 16 . 6/24/2020
awww, I fucking read this story twice alread and still in love with this, hopefully, it'll get updatedxD
yuukizero chapter 16 . 5/1/2020
This was just amazing, got to be the best au Naruhina fic I've read. I'm so glad I found it when it's practically finished because I don't know how I would have coped having to wait for more chapters. So thank you for this amazing story.
Jacal chapter 16 . 3/22/2020
Great job! Thank you for finishing this! It’s so hard to fine an adult and sensible naruhina fic nowadays so im very thankful! I hope you write more and even if u ended things well — im still aching for more haha.
bewjfew chapter 16 . 2/22/2020
I enjoy your story. It has it all: unique premise, intriguing plot, and characters with relatable flaws. I appreciate and respect how you show the diversity of sexuality in your characters without going into preacher mode of "OMFG SHES BI AND WOMEN AND YADAYADA" political statements. You show how common it is and you make it sound so grounded at the same time. It's great representation of the LGBTQ community, and you should feel so proud how tasteful and classy this story is written. A tad bit of constructive criticism I do have to add: I feel like Hinata's passive and insecure traits can be emphasized a bit more. Maybe how her father's rejection of her sexuality and goals would make her insecure about being judged for those things that make up her character. Since she is a character that retreats inward when being faced with conflict, I thought itd make sense for her to behave a little more insecure about that, and have Naruto's warm and unconditional supportive nature help gain confidence in those aspects of what makes her Hinata. I'm looking forward to your next update, but I understand that college can be a real bitch and a half. Best regards.
cinnabear22 chapter 16 . 1/24/2020
Oh wow please continue this story it is amazing! I love a strong hinata fic! I was surprised to read sakura and hinata were a couple but now I'm going to have to say I'm a sakuhina fan now.
aviesee chapter 16 . 11/29/2019
Wow, glad I found this story. I love it! Excited for more chapters to come!
aviesee chapter 4 . 11/28/2019
Hmm, an assassin?
aviesee chapter 2 . 11/28/2019
I love stories like this! I love reading AUs.
lala1224 chapter 16 . 10/17/2019
WOW. That’s all I’ve got here. My heart.
jenuzumaki chapter 16 . 10/10/2019
Oh God! Hinata is badass. Naruto is lucky to have a girl who knows how to fight and smart. I love how she hid her cell and those stupid goons didn’t even try to search for it. Naruto is really proud of his girl.
Striker - Master Of Hearts chapter 16 . 10/10/2019
Wait so did Hinata stab Naruto?
jaayl.15 chapter 16 . 10/9/2019
i love it sooo much, i’m gonna re-read this for the next couple of days
Darth Tenibris2 chapter 16 . 10/9/2019
God even after such a long break you still managed to capture the same feeling as before! This was so fucking amazing I can't even begin to describe how good it is. I would wait another year for an update if it was as good as this!
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