Reviews for put on your warpaint |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Umm... excuse me, but when are you going to finish this amazing story? I need to know what's going to happen. Please, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even I felt the attraction. My goodness, I'm loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well what can I say...first chapter and I'm already very excited. Man, Naruto as a tattoo artist wow, imagining it makes me more excited haha. My Hina always so cute , I just love it. I LOVE these two, reading about them is my passion. |
![]() ![]() This was fucking awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this the end? ..please at least make another character |
![]() ![]() I came across your fic not even two days ago and I am just IN LOVE! Beautifully written, the dialogue and world building all feel so genuine and REAL. I haven’t been this giddy and stressed about a fanfic or any book really in SO LONG. This fanfic is such a GIFT. Chapter 9 especially had me reading and pausing and reading and pausing cause I was SO STRESSED. This is entire thing is a masterpiece. Just bless you omg |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww, I fucking read this story twice alread and still in love with this, hopefully, it'll get updatedxD |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was just amazing, got to be the best au Naruhina fic I've read. I'm so glad I found it when it's practically finished because I don't know how I would have coped having to wait for more chapters. So thank you for this amazing story. |
![]() ![]() Great job! Thank you for finishing this! It’s so hard to fine an adult and sensible naruhina fic nowadays so im very thankful! I hope you write more and even if u ended things well — im still aching for more haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy your story. It has it all: unique premise, intriguing plot, and characters with relatable flaws. I appreciate and respect how you show the diversity of sexuality in your characters without going into preacher mode of "OMFG SHES BI AND WOMEN AND YADAYADA" political statements. You show how common it is and you make it sound so grounded at the same time. It's great representation of the LGBTQ community, and you should feel so proud how tasteful and classy this story is written. A tad bit of constructive criticism I do have to add: I feel like Hinata's passive and insecure traits can be emphasized a bit more. Maybe how her father's rejection of her sexuality and goals would make her insecure about being judged for those things that make up her character. Since she is a character that retreats inward when being faced with conflict, I thought itd make sense for her to behave a little more insecure about that, and have Naruto's warm and unconditional supportive nature help gain confidence in those aspects of what makes her Hinata. I'm looking forward to your next update, but I understand that college can be a real bitch and a half. Best regards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow please continue this story it is amazing! I love a strong hinata fic! I was surprised to read sakura and hinata were a couple but now I'm going to have to say I'm a sakuhina fan now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, glad I found this story. I love it! Excited for more chapters to come! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, an assassin? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love stories like this! I love reading AUs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW. That’s all I’ve got here. My heart. |