You must be a real fan of Superman comic books.

What about Gohan's SSJG Power Level?

Noice. On one hand, having power levels would add to the DBZness, but on the other ... it really really kills the suspense. A LOT. I mean, THAT is the reason Toriyama said he stopped using power levels, cuz people just started calculating and determining fights before they got over.

I hope that this story comes back. It does Gohan justice. Not to mention Kaiser, Orthros, Esdraelon, Sentinel, and Varax are all still on the loose. Not to mention Varax still has Set, we don't know hpw Cleopatra knows Gohan, and so much more. And we haven't seen how we get to that image AlphaDelta1001 did where Gohan wakes up with Videl, Zangya, Erasa, Lime, Sandra, Maya, Kana, Set, and Cleopatra. In short: please bring this back. It's the Gohan story we all deserved, and the one that we need to see how it ends.

huh, dejavu...Oi! That's the same scene from the og db when goku fought chichi! Clever.

Ok... Here we go again...

To anyone who wants to read this fic because it is poular, I warn you that the narrative is a fucking shit, there is villain after villain without really having some rest towards the reader, in addition to the excuse that dragonball z is a "sausage party" placed "oc's" which are mostly female, stupidly the same or many stronger than gohan except that human man who can bizarrely follow the speed of gohan without having practiced KI before. It ruined the Buu saga, not even narrating it correctly, exaggerated as far as the levels of power, especially the level of strength of Videl both future and present (how the hell can it be equally strong or at most have a force close to the ssj2?) It is stupid for someone human, in addition to placing enemies incessantly without any sense in the narrative, which surely adds them because he has no other way to advance the "plot" of his fic garbage. The only good thing of all is Gohan and his personality but this is overshadowed by his mediocre interactions with his oc shits, enlarging his oc's and his subtle "indirect" to throw shit Dragonball Super, which for more loose and bad that it was at the beginning far exceeds the plot joke that you have in your story.

Knowing that this story is finished, I leave a single review in this chapter. This situation is very stupid, I understand your desire to have more female characters, but two Sayayin women? That Kana which travels between dimensions, never noticed? Does this really hit the bizarre, ssj3? Not only do you believe a strong oc out of nowhere, it's very stupid, with a "background" that has the same importance as Jiren's in Dragonball Super. Akira Toriyama used the same villain because placing one villain after another is too unreasonable, you complain about it, he didn't believe villains because he felt like it, they were already reasonably associated with previous events in Dragonball and Dragonball Z. Don't just add characters or stupidly strong to advance the "plot of power" of gohan in this story,. The energy levels are disproportionate and the scouter if or if he would break when reading them, in addition to Videl being that strong, however prodigal, she did not train Ki since she was a child as tenshinhan and Krillin did in her days of Monk, in addition to the bad names you give to your ocs, they give a lot of cringe ... "paprika" ... ugh ... the narration is good but sometimes it gives a blow of mediocrity like the interactions of Gohan or the Z Original fighter with some of the ocs or the buffeted zangya.

Wanna debate on the narrative of the Boo saga?

i like this story but what ever came bout from your doomsday reference?

Perhaps I shouldn't have watched the movie as a refresher before reading this; this was almost an identical copy anyway. Most of the scenes and lines are pretty much the same as the movie, with only a few Videl and other minor miscellaneous scenes added in. I hope the next chapter deviates better, but I guess even if it doesn't, most of this fic is original anyway. At least it seems so by judging by the chapter titles. Not the greatest first impression though.

weak gohan

this is the worst fic ever pointless

fucking shit

I kinda like paprika. Its cool to have a makyan qs a figgter. Also I kinda like the rivalry from her qnd gohan. Its like Mao and emme from devil is a oartbtimmer except gohan is good qnd paprika is nit evil but an anti hero. Its kinda nice

WOW! varax, who couldn't possibly be more powerful(according to the author) and ultron! i mean android 16!