|Reviews for You Complete Me|
| nessiesmith2012 chapter 5 . 3/16
I like your story so far, but feel like your skipping. If this was a book I'd swear there would be pages ripped out.
| Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 14 . 12/31/2017
Oh pobre sevy
| nightpurr chapter 17 . 12/15/2017
Wow great chapter! Thanks for the great entertainment.
| nightpurr chapter 4 . 12/14/2017
I am glad to have came across your story. It is very good. I hope that you be finishing it. I don't mind waiting when it's good like this one. I just hate to get involved reading one and it not being finish. Keep up the good work. Must go got more chapters to read yet.
| ShadowLady89 chapter 17 . 11/10/2017
how low can dumbledore get. update more
| ShadowLady89 chapter 14 . 11/10/2017
he is back and wow
| ShadowLady89 chapter 12 . 11/10/2017
poor harry all in the name of revenge
| ShadowLady89 chapter 11 . 11/10/2017
| ShadowLady89 chapter 10 . 11/10/2017
when did tom and harry plan this?
| Gurgaraneth chapter 17 . 11/7/2017
Love it lookin forward to more
| ArielSakura chapter 17 . 9/28/2017
I, not usually a fan of HP/TMR but this story is so bloody intriguing!, I need to know what's going to happen next! Really enjoying this thank yoU. Keep up the good work!
| Sarahburch chapter 17 . 9/24/2017
| Estriella chapter 17 . 9/14/2017
One thing that always amazes me in your story? Pairs. Lucius and Remus, Charlie and Severus and James, Bill and Draco, now Bella and Arthur. This is shocking but positive. I never know what to expect.
| TheCommanderin chapter 17 . 8/15/2017
as stated befor this doesnt make sence the pacing seems too fast and alot of character interactions seem rushed and nonsensicle but there are good bits example mollys death and percys subplot
percys interactions with his brothers dont make sence after the when they meet at the company and charlie says something of enjoying knocking percy down a peg when if he and his brothers actually thought about it and didnt see it as just blackmail material they would have questioned why percy turned to working in the porn indistry in the first place yes u could say that they dont like percy because of his actions but they have already mentioned that they know it was a result of their mothers mechinations and that they shouldnt hold it against him and even partly blame themselves for how he turned out as well
your premis is great but your characters are very inconsistent as if they have split personalities or something
| TheCommanderin chapter 15 . 8/15/2017
as i read this i find alot of things dont make sence