|Reviews for Naruto the Strongest Shield (Saikyō no Tate)|
| GUEST 1 chapter 13 . 5/19
Jay about my last idea google Renas dandelion genesis of aquarion. Sorry if i confused you buddy. Peace
| GUEST 1 chapter 13 . 5/18
Good chapter jay, my favorite part was when the bed broke that was funny. Im glad you liked my idea for a naruto/freezing I cant wait till you post it. I have two ideas that you can use. 1 When mokas sister goes to the school have her really insult naruto for being a halfbreed. 2 Google ranas song aquarion you can have akua or ageha sing it to naruto when he ends up in the nurses office again Peace
| hellfire45 chapter 13 . 5/18
Good make more chapters and you shouldn't have had moka with tsukune
| Angga the blue emperor chapter 13 . 5/17
well that's was great chapter...
naruto and one piece cross when update.. …
| ncpfan chapter 13 . 5/17
Nice - a lot happened in this chapter, but I wonder what's up with Naruto protecting Kuyo of all people? Looking forward to finding out.
| Ranmaleopard chapter 13 . 5/17
This is just really awesome keep it up
| DragonPony022 chapter 13 . 5/17
Wow well that cliff hanger alright. I wonder why Naruto is protecting Kuyo. I am hope'in it is because he wants to be the one to kill him. Which seeing hos Tsukune I am sure doesn't like Naruto at all anyway will not wait to jump at the chance to attack him. Hell he might blame him for the suffering Moka has gone through up till this point. Thinking if he was there he could have prevented it. Which Naruto will call out as weakling thinking, wanting someone else to protect what he should be able to protect himself.
I do have to say... WHAT! What is Moka saying Tsukune is her mate and kissing him. I mean she almost never showed any affection for him at all and not to mention she was JUST fantasizing about Naruto not too long ago. It seems that I thought Inner (true) Moka would start to have a effect on Outer Moka but it seems to be the other way around. I mean I don't see where these strong feelings and trust she all of a sudden put in him comes from when she barely interacted with him, hell even less then she did in the canon. I hope we get to see where these feeling come from during or after the fight. It would be interesting if Inner Moka got attracted (or started to lust after) Naruto seeing him fight the one her Outer put all her faith in and the one that is a high class demon as well.
Anyway great chapter it not alittle confusing on that relationship standpoint, can't wait to see more
| DragonBolt21 chapter 13 . 5/17
WTF you can't do a cliff hanger after a ending like that. It's just so cruel
| mundanebeast chapter 13 . 5/17
Hmm trump card indeed
| Gen death chapter 13 . 5/17
Jay3000 yo is da bombs.
But seriously though I am really feeling this naruto I'm kinfldve tired of naruto constantly being the bigger guy ( mentally) as in he can never seem to hold a grudge or always ends up being the one that changes his mindset for everybody else.
PS. I hope tskune dies because I do not feel like he can add anymore to the story also with him gone who knows how much drama or plot opens up due to that death.
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/17
Can you just kill tsukun in this. Throughout most of this fic you made him useless so just kill him already.
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/17
Yes have naruto kill tsukune and add moka to naruto harem.
| gamelover41592 chapter 13 . 5/17
| StrongGuy159 chapter 13 . 5/17
Cool chapter continue please.
| Stratos263 chapter 13 . 5/17
God dam it man cliffhanger come on