Reviews for Back in Black |
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![]() ![]() You know, rereading this, I just can't enjoy it anymore - the hypocrisy (unintentional it may be) and all the continuity errors within the fic itself. It's just not as good as when I was a fresh eyed teenager. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whimpering there is no more... We need more, please get your muse back for this one soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't do it, don't read this... Dang I'm still reading it why was it abandoned? I sincerely hope you get your muse back for this one soon. |
![]() ![]() can I translate your fiction into French? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ..."(she) snapped her wand" is just plain wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you be updating this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this continues someday soon (Although I doubt that it will) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! If you ever update this again I’d love to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() when bear farted and Fawkes passed out I thought it would have been funnier if Fawkes went into a burning day because of the smell and caused an explosion |
![]() ![]() are you ever going to finish your stories ? |
![]() ![]() can we see it animated |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE, IT'S CRAZY HOW FAST I'VE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC AND IT HASN'T EVEN BEEN UPDATED IN NEARLY TEN YEARS! THIS IS THE SAM AND DEAN I WISH WE GOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LISTEN, I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT, BUT YOU'RE ONE OF THE ONLY WRITERS I'VE FOUND THAT'S EVER MADE ME ACTUALLY BURST OUT LAUGHING SO HARD THAT I MADE MYSELF LIGHTHEADED! DEAN'S STITCH PRANK ON SAM NEARLY KILLED ME! I WISH MORE FICS HAD HUMOR LIKE THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everything was going okay until this turned into a yaoi fic. I would have preferred a warning next time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, now I WANT to hear Snape do "the talk". I bet he sounds like that sex ed teacher in Mean Girls. "Don't have sex. If you have sex you'll catch a disease and die. Don't have sex standing up, don't have sex sitting...Just... don't do it! Now everyone grab a pamplet on the prevention spell and get out!" Small fyi: Hagrid HATES Slytherins. “Better Hufflepuff than Slytherin,” said Hagrid darkly. "There's not a single witch or wizard who went bad who wasn't in Slytherin. You-Know-Who was one.” Direct quote btw. He may be extremely nice, but his own bad experiences have left him every bit as predjudiced against Slytherins as ron is. If Slytherins were black people instead, Hagrid would be the world's nicest racist. It's not that he bullies them or anything. He's just convinced they're all evil, and everything they say and do is suspicious, and everyone should stay far away from them. Hagrid is a simple and unintelligent person. People like that see everything in black-and-white, good-and-evil.. And Slytherins are definitely in the "evil" cathegory for him. The best measure of inteligence is to find the person who sees the grey-zones. And Hagrid is not one of them. Nice doesn't equal non-judgemental. Nor does racist (or house-ist in this case) equal a mean or cruel person. And predjudices are notoriously hard to get rid of. MAYBE he'd overcome it if Harry had been a Slytherin and him AND his friends were nice... but he might just justify it with the hat missplacing Harry, and his friends being manipulative to explain the niceness. As a rule people don't change their minds once it's made up. Not most people anyway. Love the story btw. _ And I have to wonder what Dean could POSSIBLY do that beat Hermione's suprisingly evil accomplishment of having umbridge raped by centaurs. (I know the books doesn't outright say it, but in mythology that is what centaurs always do. Plus, her trauma, her ripped and torn clothes... It's obvious. It's just written in a way it won't traumatize the kids reading it. In my opinion.) I'm sad Lu's not here tho. He's always my favorite. But I WILL laugh my ass off if, when they come back, they discover than he changed his looks and opened a certain nightclub named Lux in L.A, and spend his "Permanent Vacation" sleeping with men and women alike and granting "favors". (Can I root for Lu to fall in love with this new Harry? _ I can totally see the parent-deprived boy end up with a fetish for the whole "daddy's home" routine, and fall for the worst possible player because he have self-esteem issues that will make him gravitate towards men he really shouldn't date (luke Barney Stinson or Lucifer). And I can also see Lucifer being drawn to the innocence and youth of Harry. ...and I can also see Dean, Gabe, Sam and Cas quadruple whip him over the head and demand he at LEAST wait until Harry's 16 -AFTER they interrogate him about his intentions like a bunch of overprotective parents. Lol ) What does -that chinese thing puppies look like? xD And how much will Crowley damned near BEG to get his hands on a few of those puppies...ESPECIALLY if they can turn invisible like his own beloved dogs. (And Crowley DO love his dogs. And for some reason give them really american female names, like Juliet. Another one is refered to as "Growley", but only outside the show. Lucifer names his Hellhound Ramsey. After saving the dog from g-d who tried to desteoy them all. (G-d is kinda an asshole in Supernatural (not unlike in the old testament of the bible) when you think about it. His first creatures were a "failure" in his eyes, so he threw them into Purgatory in Hell and now they're used by demons as waste disposal. He created Hellhounds, but didn't like that they were so vicious, so instead of finding someone who could control them or making a safe space, he destroys them. Then he drops a bomb with the whole human thing, watchs his children argue about it, and instead of resolving the fight he just takes off and tell his still deeply dependent children to deal with everything themselves, and never so much as send a post card. What kind of dad DOES that? Jeez... no wonder the angels ended up the way they did, lacking proper parental guidance at a clearly teenage stage.) Oh, and Crowley really wanted to take revenge on Sam for killing his dog, so it's safe to say he loves them more than a demon proboably should. And to him and his line of work, size matters. A LOT.) I really hope you plan to write more, cuz this story is awesome! _ |