So Charlie's a chump here, huh? Also unusual for fanfic.

So she's got two interested admirers. Good start to the summer!

So she's beach bound & Renee is still around. Unique.

Great story. Thanks so much for sharing.

Huh... wow... I can’t believe what a bad seed Riley is and that Mike isn’t as bad as he’s been portrayed.

Car accident? I’m thinking Edward had some kind of accident that gave him problems with his memory. I’m say car accident because his father seems to have some health problems also. But, I have to believe that what Edward’s been through has something to do with the preppy kids that come for the summer.

Rose is out of control.

Rose needs a good talking to from Bella. Riley and his friends is not a safe place to be, that’s why she has been avoiding them. Hanging out with Rose seemed to be safer but then she goes and invites Riley without her permission.

When Riley was listing his friends I felt fear for Bella but than when he got to the waitress Rose my fear switched to her. I really hope she isn’t going to be gang raped in this story. Is Bella in the same category as Rose? Bella did tell Riley she was going to her fathers beach house, so maybe not as low as Rose but not with the same respect as someone in his circle...?

Bella should delicately explain how things have always been. Poor Emily needs to except things how they are and decide if she can be happy that way or move on. A person who works like that usually needs a partner who has their own career and personal interests for it to work.

Poor Emily. I wonder what she’s thinking. If Bella wasn’t there she would be alone.

How does she know the boy was waiting for the next bus? He could have been waiting for a ride like her. Unless he was a drifter, better not to assume, looks can be deceiving.

Is Bella bi? Or maybe she just had a girl crush...

This was such a great story, so sweet and romantic. Thank you for sharing

this was so bittersweet. but amazing. you are a very talented writer. i loved it all. thanks for sharing