Mmmm for some reason I don't think I've read this one...interesting start, Charlie and Emily, now that's one I didn't see coming!

Wonderful story, reminds me of the Sarah Dessen books I read when I was younger!

Very nice little story. Thank you.

Loooved this book! These characters. So great - dialogue, choices/pathways, plot. Not a single wasted character, each progressed the story further and richer. Loved the growth of everyone (even riley- tho he chose to grow in the wrong direction). Even carlisle and charlie grew, changed, progressed along. I absolutely love the image of b playing poker and sizing everyone in the room up at the same time. Ha! That was tops! Great ending.

I've had this story on my radar for too long, really kickin myself for not paying closer attention until now...so good.

Great story! I couldn’t stop reading...
Fantastic ending, three words from beginning til the end, it works perfectly. I would love to read an epi/futuretake ;)
Thanks for sharing!

What a fun adventure. Makes me miss my summers at the shore. :)

That was the sweetest ending... beautiful

Such a lovely story.
Hard. Heartbreaking. Heartwarming.
I love how you left it.
Hard. Heartbreaking. Optimistic.
I loved the change in Edward over the course of the summer in finding love, support, and understanding in Bella. He is the Phoenix here.
Thank you for your well-chosen words, the pictures they painted and the spectrum of emotions I felt.

Kept me up through the night , good read.

Great story, loved the build-up. Thank you for sharing.

Are you Sarah Dessen?

amazing story ;) thanks so much for giving them a seemingly happy ending ;D

Aww! I loved this! Great writing. I especially loved the ending. :) Thanks for sharing.

Thank you so much for this amazing story! Your writing is so good and easy to read. I love your Edward and Bella) Thank you!