Reviews for The Family Business
Aliness chapter 29 . 10/5

Talvez você não chegue a ler esse comentário devido aos entraves da linguá, mas se você conseguir, eu preciso te disser que sua história me manteve lendo um dia e uma noite inteiras, simplesmente assim que comecei não consegui para. Você é uma escritora incrível, eu por alguns momentos, eu me senti lendo HP novamente e vendo um episódio muito bom de Supernatural... AO MESMO TEMPO!

Considerando que sua ultima atualização foi em 2016, temo estar fazendo um apelo que nunca será houvido, mas preciso tentar! Por favor, atualize a história, PRECISAMOS saber o que acontece a seguir, é vida ou morte...

POR FAVOR, POR FAVOR, POR FAVOR! Espero que meu apelo tenha tocado seu coração, e que você se compadeça de seus leitores.

(PS: Não sei se esse é o tipo de história, e se não for, OK, mas se fosse uma história M, deuses, seria perfeita).

Beijos... Sua nova e desesperada fã.
coffeecoffeecoffee04 chapter 29 . 9/9
awesome chapter! can't wait for the next one!
Jab chapter 29 . 9/5
Second or third time reading through it all, and LOVING IT more and more! I literally keep a tab open on my phone with this fic because I don’t wanna lose it! I bet your novel is just as amazing, you’re a talented writer my dude!
EtoileCyber2 chapter 29 . 8/5
Awesome! Please update soon.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27
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Kallanit chapter 5 . 7/26
I hope you don't mind me pointing this out, but you keep mixing up Incarcerous and Immobulus. Incarerous is the spell that binds people. Immobulus freezes them - also a good spell to use against enemies, but it doesn't tie them in ropes or chains.
LooneyLuna15 chapter 29 . 7/23
I'm following this story because I'm crossing my fingers you'll decide to come back to it at one point. I love this story! and now I'm completely bummed I've finished so please update when you can!
Guest chapter 29 . 7/15
I LOVED ALL OF IT. I hope you decide to continue this because it feels like everything is just beginning between Hermione and Dean. It was a long journey but totally worth it! Keep on writing!
MilandaAnza chapter 26 . 7/8
So rereading this story and I just noticed a sequel to mama bear?
AmethystRoseMalfoy chapter 29 . 7/6
This story is really wonderful. Don't know if you plan to continue it, but if you dont, this is actually a really good place to end it. Dean has finally told Hermione how he feels about her. And she seems to have recovered from her trip to the cage.
If you want to continue their story, you could write a sequel.
I do hope you write more of this pairing. Hermione and Dean really compliment each other, and you write them so well.
anono chapter 19 . 6/26
Hiiiii! It's spelled Hecate. I thought at first it was a typo so I just ignored it. But it's been giving me a headache bc it keeps repeating. You'll probably never edit this ever but still.
Annadallen chapter 29 . 6/21
I love this story and I hope you get the chance to finish it! Not that I would know nor am I looking to pry but I hope life if treating you well! And you get a spark from your muse! ;)
LalaRiver chapter 29 . 5/20
Oh i hope u updated this story. Im so in luv with it
Nanyin chapter 29 . 5/18
hey what happens next?!
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 29 . 5/17
This is an awesome story. Please let the muse, plot bunny loose to help you finish this. Thank you for sharing your talent in story telling.
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