|Reviews for Darkness and Light|
| superdork1 chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
i had a feeeling that was going to happen...
well, i really liked your first ff and i'm hoping this one will be as good! i can't wait for more! i love d/hr!
| saj aneri chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
so far i'm hating you... JUST KIDDING!
i loooooved fire and ice and i'm sure i'll love this too...
anyway, keep it up and i hope i'll be reading the rest of the story soon!
| starlight chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
Wow! You're story so far is really good! I LOVED Fire and Ice. Write more, Write more!
| dragon eyes3 chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
Ok, I'm going to do what you asked:
I hate you!
lol, j/k. I LOVED Fire and Ice, and this one seems promising, too. A very good plot... oOo interesting. PLEASE! UPDATE SOON! I. HAVE. TO. KNOW. WHAT. HAPPENS! lol, keep up the good work, you write beautifully _
| mutsumi chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
ok. so i' gonna do what you said... why did you do that? i was actually hoping for more fluff and sweet nothings and... oh, alright. it's ok really, but you have to do something about that prologue... fast! D
| Siobhan chapter 1 . 11/15/2002
This is getting interesting. I really want to know whats gonna happen next. How come this chapter was so short? Continue writing I love your work.
| D'quer Jyi-Weil chapter 1 . 11/15/2002
Alright...you asked me to tell you how much I hate you for doing this...so I will.
Helen, I hate you for doing this.
Now I have a secret to share with you. *whispers* I'm a liar! See...I just lied for a 2nd time.*
No that that's over and done with...
Are you kidding me! I love this! I mean c'mon! You've set up a great beginnning for a plot! You know exactly what adjectives to use and what verbs and what to put first and second and so on...you get the picture don't you?
The only part I didn't really like was when Draco says, "I could have been evil." I know he's just summerizing for his father but I think, "You wanted me to be evil. I know. But I'm not." Or something like a confirmation and then a rejection of what his father is saying. Did that make any sense?
Anyways I love how this is beginning and I just want to know if Draco will ask Harry and Ron for help. By the way, how old are these guys now? 6th year? Out of Hogwarts? Later in the 5th year?
I don't need to ask if Hermione and Draco will get back together because I know you'll re-matchmake them.
I hope this was helpful!
| Akira Gown chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
MAD? Mad's an understatement! ARGH! How could you do this? I actually went to see what others put and it's actually quite funny. You've got quite a number of death threats! LOL! Ok, not a time to be laughing, but it's actually really funny! You're so cruel to those two! EEP! I need to go feed myself! You better update weekly... daily would be nice, but that's asking too much!
| kcheyne chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
YOU EVIL MONKEY! HOW COULD YOU DESTROY THAT PERFECT RELATIONSHIP? HOW COULD YOU, EVIL MONKEY?
(And don't take any offense. I get called an evil monkey all the time. it's funny.)
Anyhoo, I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU TORE THEM APART! I'M GOING TO LOCK YOU IN THE CHATEAU D'IF (WHERE THE COUNT OF MONTE CRISTO WAS IMPRISONED) AND TAKE YOUR ONLY INMATE FRIEND'S LIFE CUZ HE HAS A FATAL DISEASE TO BEGIN WITH AND YOU'LL STAY THERE FOR FOURTEEN YEARS UNTIL FINALLY I AM ABLE TO CALM DOWN!
*ahem* Sorry. Actually, I was just planning on waiting with baited breath to see what you do.
| Katrina chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
Dear me...YOU ARE EVIL! YOU ARE EVIL! YOU ARE EVIL! OH MY GOD! I AM GONNA KILL YOU! RIP YOU APART! AAAAAHHHHHH!
| MysticalStormz chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
hey cool you got out a sequel! i thought Fire and Ice was really good and this one is looking good to. Only one thing...NOOOOOOOOOO YOU CANN'T MAKE HER FORGET!IT TOOK THEM SO LONG TO REASLISE IT THE FIRST TIME! lol! just kidding! i'm lovingit and can't wait till you update! unitl then,
p.s can u reveiw my story KOD Kiss of death? i'd really appreciate it
| Nardaviel chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
::locks you in a cell until you’ve got them back together, and then murder you using a very sharp pencil, a piglet, and Lucius’ retinue of Dark Spells::
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT? Great story - luv your prose, it's very elegant - but still...! Oh. My. God. POOR DRACO! POOR HERMIONE! POOR ROMANTIC RELATIOSHIP! ::growl:: Can't believe you did that. Great story, btu I still can't believe...
| KirbyKirst chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
*tsks* well i must say, that wasn't realy what i'd hoped would happen...*sighs* oh drat, i can't be mad at you, there has to be a plot i suppose, as much as we might think we just want it to be happy lovey and all those other nice things, it would get boring eventually if there wasn't something like this *sigh* ahh well, i trust you'll fix it right? ooo, and i haven't reviewed before, which would be mostl ybecause i just read fire and ice yesterday (yes the whole thing) but i plan to review this one, *evil grin* you cannot get rid of me! hehe, till next chapter!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
how cum in fire and ice it was draco/ginny
and in darkness and light it's draco/hermione?
| hyper-shark chapter 1 . 11/13/2002
? YOU... YOU... *SCREAMS* *BREATHS HEAVILY* ! YOU CANT DO TTTHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT! *TEARS SOME HAIR OUT* NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO! U... BETTER... UPDATE... IT... QUICK... FAST... BEFORE...I... DDDDDDDDIIIIIIIIEE!