Reviews for Break of Dawn
darkpaladin89 chapter 3 . 7/28/2017
These three are a riot!
Anon chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
Cute. I liked the moment they got back to the palace, where everyone's freaking out, and the machine gun bit. I guess with Laguna's personality, it's balancing to see those "Oh yeah, he's an important guy here" moments, and written like *surprise!* hahaha.
BlueMoomba chapter 3 . 3/12/2017
I'm so glad you're back! I fell in love with this story since the start! I love the little moments between Squall and Laguna and you really capture both of them, real well!
Keko-the-Hybrid chapter 3 . 2/12/2017
Haha, glad to see you back and writing. I still don't know much about this fandom, but I still enjoyed the *preview*. Haha. Might have to go back and read the other chapters sometime. Your writing doesn't seem to have suffered despite your lack of time, which is really good to see! Until next time :) Don't be a stranger!
LuvinAniManga chapter 2 . 10/2/2015
Aww, those two chapters were so very cute! I love reading little SquallxLaguna family moments in fanfiction, since we never got those in the game. Sigh... But I think it's utterly adorable that Squall acted like such a little boy trying to be like his daddy with his daddy's "toy." ;) This chapter was just too cute for words! Great job, and keep it up!
h34rt1lly chapter 2 . 9/5/2015
Lol first, your notes. He's SO tsundere in this, but it's okay, because he totally is overall anyway :P two, it makes total sense why you wrote him the way you wrote him. I think it fits perfectly.

This was adorable. Like I said in my review for your other story, I looooove father/son exploration (that sounded horribly disturbing) and I adore when people write Laguna/Squall. The moment in chapter one where Laguna witnesses all of the quirks Squall has that mirror his own, were great. The star-gazing similarity was also a nice touch.

Thanks for writing this : 3 hopefully you write more soon, if you're planning on continuing it!
Ayuka86 chapter 2 . 6/16/2015
This is pretty cute. I like your Laguna and Squall's reactions to him. Can't wait top read more.
kiiroiyuuri chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
currently i'm having this ff8 nostalgic waves now and after read your story, it's so sweet
the way you depicted their interactions are so endearing!
can't wait for more!
Keko-the-Hybrid chapter 2 . 3/14/2015
NawwwWW! I looove father-son fluff. I wonder *where oh where* I started loving these kinds of stories? It's a complete mystery... *lol*
But seriously, I know almost nothing about this game but your story gave me enough information to quickly piece together their personalities. I loved their little chat about similarities in chapter one and how they both like looking at the stars (also reminds me of a certain other father son duo!)
Maybe I will play this game. I hope you write more!
BlueMoomba chapter 2 . 2/11/2015
I absolutely ADORE this story!
You've captured Squall and Laguna well! :D
I find myself, really busting out, laughing at the humor.
I love the end of chapter 2! Laguna running to the burnt pancakes! Hahaha!
I love Squall and Laguna, I'm a lot like Squall in the withdrawn/anxiety department, and Laguna is everything I wish my father was...
That this hits home with me, gives it my support! :D
Layla evercrest chapter 2 . 1/30/2015
Awesome job! keep going!
Ai Mamoru chapter 2 . 1/27/2015
Yeah, that was embarassing. I would have crawled under the bed, definitely!

Laguna's reaction to Squall's offer to pay for the damage was reaally Laguna ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2015
Maybe I got it wrong, but I thought this story happening after "Miracles" and considering this, Squall's quite cold to Laguna again. I expected the chapter beginning like it ended ;) The point being: I like to read about Squall warming up to his father slowly, not ignoring him. Although this behaviour is totally canon, I can't believe, how anybody is able to NOT love Laguna., he's great :)
PINKDIAMOND4000 chapter 2 . 1/25/2015
Awwwww! Squall feels so much in character! Hope you can update UD anytime :D I think this chapter was very sweet and nicely writen. I laughed so hard when the machine gun shoot XDecember poor Squall.
pinkperson chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Great job :) The part with Squall dying on the inside every time Laguna says "don't let the bed bugs bite" made me laugh. It was a cute story. I'd love to see more chapters.
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