I loved it. Thanks for sharing the story!

Nice story..made me smile :) Thanks for sharing it.

Totally brilliant and very entertaining. Fast-paced, more than usual even, but an all around wonderful story.

while this story is very fun, it is rushed and one-dimensional as well. you devote no real effort to Harold's emotional development and simply list his achievements. I applaud you for using Harold instead of the stupid and non-sensical "Hadrian" that croped up in fanfiction. Apart from that this is a rather lazy example of the fix-it genre. This should have been at the very least douple or tripple in length. I doubt you meant it that way, but Harold's reaction to James' and Liliy's death makes him look callous, uncaring and cold. There is no real opportunity to relate to you protagonist. I suggest you either rewrite this or but in a second version this time with some more effort. Read a few good novels and study how the characters are presented. Look up some tips for budding authors on the web.

Another terrific story! Excellent use of the smart!Harry / Time Travel tropes: Unique and on target!
No, I wasn't too upset about the loss of the Potters and Frank, but I was a bit disconcerted by Harry's lack of affect. I know that HE never really knew his parents, but he did become acquainted with them in THIS timeline and yet he seemed more concerned about saving the Prewett twins than his parents. Not a big deal, but I noticed it.
Thanks for sharing this with us!
MelJ

I saw a comment from a guest on temporal paradoxes, and I just wanted to point out that if the author didn't state that one was going to happen, or that there's even a possibility, and it's after the end of the story, I'd give good odds on it being an alternate timeline branching from the moment that Harry arrived in the past.

Really lacking in detail, but I enjoyed the story for the most part. At the very least, put some work into relationships. Oh wow, Harry now has a wife and daughter who have never spoken in the story. I don't care; you could call them 'Wife o' Harry' and 'Lil Gal' and I wouldn't care any more about it, because they're blank slates. You didn't characterize them in the slightest. Otherwise, while it is OOC for Harry to be a potion's master, it's always enjoyable to see Harry fix the past.

Cada vez que la leo me enamora esta historia

awesome ...

Loved it! What you can't accomplish with a little logic.

great story i enjoyed it.

This was awesome I'm glad I found it.

Well-thought-out AU story that asks the question, "What if Harry went back in time and fixed wizarding culture?" It's heavy on description, but that is consistent with the intended story line.

Worth a read!

Very Good.

Aww man, this was one of the best good-ending stories ever. I don't really care about time travel, just the fact that you showed that change was possible through hard work, smart investments and most importantly, time. I loved this story!