There's just too much "Harry's allies are intelligent, everyone else is sheep" in this story. I don't think I can get past this chapter. It's a shame really, I was liking most of the other aspects of the story.

This was an excellent story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

If you can get by the remorseful Grindelwald and majority character bashing then this is a fantastic fic. I can get by it.

I would have liked a more expanded ending. I also wanted Dobby rescued. I like that crazy elf.

suprising end1 love it!

The iconic ending line.

All was well.

Damn. I didn't really hate Dumbledore as much in this story as in other stories, and this is probably the worst punishment i've seen him get. I think it would have been better for Amelia to get that.

Wow. Chapter 13 gave the chills.

This story, like all of them has a few problems with it, but all in all it was really good and worth the time to read.

All I can say is this is my favorite Ginny. Usually in fanfics Ginny is some shy princess that loves Harry and gets him, some bashed Stalker fangirl that Harry Hates, or a carbon copy of canon. This Ginny has a completely different personality, is much more developed, and is probably the only Ginny I would want to get together with Harry.

Chapter 7 was just..Goddamn is all i'm gonna say. Whoever did it better say bye-bye.

Mating scene between the wolves not the fall out we’re that unexpected. The drama is a bit thick though, for my tastes. Hated by everyone in the school for flimsy reasons and of his two allies one is killed and the other now hates him? I’m sure you have direction for the story but it does cause the events to feel a bit forced in my opinion.

Also, unfortunate that Daphne is at least complicit with the Death Eaters. I do always enjoy a story that can use the blank slate pure blood heiress in a fashion that goes beyond “mindless sycophant.”

A loss! This was perhaps the first fic I picked up a liking for her.

I wonder what Gellert's animagus form might havebeen. You don't preach about fascinating magic without trying it! Although now I can't unsee old, graceful Gellert suddenly changing into a Sparrow. CAPTAIN Jack Spartow.

At least Gellert went fighting. Still, a loss.

Nice start. I usually avoid bashing of any character, but I more than understand why Harry is talking the way he at the same time he acts very very Griffindor-like, that's a neat trick. I wish we knew more about his time with Gellert, so I might just go on and focus on the flashbacks.