Honestly, I was kinda ambivalent when I read the summary but as soon as I saw Grindelwald I knew what was up and I'm totally here for it

This is a very interesting story.

Every character just seems to be an irredeemable and unpleasant asshole. But in a way that actually works incredibly well.

This is one of those rare fics where it felt like not a single word was wasted. Often I skim read a fair bit to get to the good bits because so many authors pad things out, but this story is incredibly tight.

Loved it, was a pleasure to read.

Hi, I found your story and I couldn't stop reading until I finished it, totally different from others and I loved it. We always want Harry to get rid of Tom and everyone recognizes him and a bright future with all the good press, but the reality is that everyone is selfish and wants to do what's best for themselves. That he went to another country with Ginny, it was better. a new and very happy life. I give you a standing ovation for your ingenuity congratulations

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Great ending to a great piece of fanfiction. Kudos to you!

Holy Fuck. That sure came unexpected. Great Fic tho

This was was definitely a piece of art.

Lame, sexist, paedo-like story with the ever-so-annoying Mugglewank. It's always lame as fuck when the Queen gets involved and is suddenly all badass and whatever.

Too bad she couldn't do a damn thing about the state of our world, eh?

...politically correct Harry its is... *Sigh*

I don't know why I ever expected anything else.

I LOVE the first chapter of this! :D

Oh! Will Harry continue Grindewald's grand fight? _

I know for a fact that he let muggleborns join him. And as far as I can tell, he planned to rule over muggles as a benevolent overlord, so his motives are not all that bad really.

(And looking at all the shit muggles come up with when left to control things themselves, one can see why so many people would agree to this.

Heck... He'd even manage to gather a muggle following who'd easily could turn into a wizard worshipping cult if he wanted too.

Of course, wizards aren't any better than muggles at controlling things, but that easy to forget. Lol

I can totally see him setting himself up as the god-emperor in Warhammer 20k did.)

I REALLY hope that Harry won't be written in a sad attempt of political correctness, but will be allowed to florish under his new mentor -even IF some of his ideas involve enslaving 2/3ds of mankind. Lol

I look forward to see how this turns out. _

My review for this fic:

Ignore the scathing sexist garbage/objectification of women/demeaning of women found mostly in the first 10 chapters, and this is a very interesting read.

VERY original concept which was executed quite well, some clever humor, and a very satisfying ending.

The behavior with the second year is basically grooming. Never write about anything like that again, please. This hits a trashy sweet spot for me, but if you want to be an actually good author, you'll have to write women better than this. Saying this as a dude who thinks popular feminism is major bullshit.

Being so gross about sex really hurts the quality of this story. Dominance is fine, but what's displayed here is only a bad caricature of dominance.

Okay so no big battle with voldy at the end but the it fits for your take on Harry, great story great writing. He got the girl and got the fuck out of there. Well done sir!