Well, liked it, too bad we didn't really see how Wizard Britain and Hogwarts get funny time with Voldemort

Well. That was a pretty flaccid ending to a fairly lame story overall.

Two-thirds of this story is wasted in Hogwarts before just bumrushing to an ending of "Harry gives up at the finish line because the Government is mean". Harry totally cocking up his approach on how to deal with Voldemort and his other goals was a nice change from the master planner, ultimate manipulator sort of character he gets presented as in these kinds of stories, but it doesn't help that every plan he puts into motion still pretty much succeeds anyway.

I do have to agree with some of the other commenters that you do seem to have a weird problem with women. Almost every woman in this story that isn't Ginny or Tracey is presented as the most obnoxious, rude person in the world, and almost every single one of them speaks in the exact same voice in terms of how you write their dialogue. In general, everyone but Harry is passed the idiot ball, in service of making him look better in the process. Also, I could've really gone without the wolf sex in explicit detail or Harry ogling an unconscious woman and stealing her underwear. That was really fucking weird, bro.

Ginny in general was a major letdown of a character. She's presented as this badass, independent fighter and we're constantly hearing about how great she is at dueling, but the only time she does any actual fighting is against a man already tied up and unable to fight back and a Hufflepuff that clearly isn't remotely a match for her. Once she and Harry leave Hogwarts she devolves immediately into just a hole for Harry to plunge his dick into, and a damsel for him to save.

Overall, a disappointing read. Your technical ability is good, but the content you produced left a lot to be desired.

Just one nitpick about the Claymore mine and the grenades. A claymore mine is completely lethal to every not behind hard cover human in a 60 degree arc and a range of 50 meters in front of the mine. Most likely dead out to 100 meters, yes the length of a football pitch.

A standard grenade has a lethal kill radius of 50 feet not diameter - radius. Meaning, within 50 feet without body armor you're almost certainly dead.

Movies do not show realism with respect to claymore mines or grenades.

All the Death Eaters would have died from the Claymore.

soo fucking goood gray harry and ginny rules

Bloody hell! That's the most unexpected ending I've ever read! But I dont blame them, that's probably what I wouldve done too. What a Great story btw! I've been reluctant to read this before, now came to think of it I dont know why, but I regret that now. Definitely one of my favourites!

I liked where this story was going, but I couldn't force myself to read after the first couple of chapters. imo a lot of the characters were unnecessarily antagonistic and the sexual harassment from harry was very icky.

maybe it gets better later on in the story but the plot would've been a lot better if not for those elements

BEAUTIFUL

Accidenti qui la si mette male!
Sangue e morte e guai a non finire!

I enjoyed this story AND the ending. I only wish that there was more "face rubbing" involved: where the Weasleys, faculty, Susan Bones, etc. realize that they had brought it upon themselves.

Loved it!
I always liked the idea of Harry being the PUNISHER.

A roller coaster of emotions but a true great end. I always thought that Harry should had just left Britain after all the bullshit he went through.

I do love a good story, of whatever flavour (apart from Slash), and this was very enjoyable. Thanks again for your imagination and Arnel's skill set.
Thank you.

Lots of things can happen in between paragraphs. Like, when you decide you can’t read into the fact that your fav character is choking on poison, then when you pick it back up, you learn said character is dead. I went from worrying for their health to going ape shit. So cruel, but alas a death of a weasel is going to be bittersweet revenge. I demand a sadistically slow, agonizing death of one expensively gelled blonde.

I was initially uncomfortable with the language, destruction of canon characters, etc in the entire fanfic. But really, the fanfic was good. I like the idea of Harry and Ginny leaving Britain for a better life in the end.

Idk why, just watched SKAM France and I just imagine harry to look like Elliot, not that I’m complaining... also, if the Elliot and Skam France tidbit wasn’t enough- I’m gay, exclusively so. But it’s refreshing to actually be invested in a non gay relationship, first time in a long time. ALso, damn, Ginny in this. wow. Just wow. I think she just straightened me out or something. Kudos to you author, for doing the impossible.