This is fuckin awful, seriously.

Ohhhh I’m so sad! This was such a great story but then you made Harry into a sexual predator I was really enjoying the premise but I’m afraid that no matter who the person is (Pansy Parkinson) or what they were doing wrong (attacking Harry) it is never acceptable or justified to sexually molest them while they are unconscious. Eewww. Nevertheless I appreciate all the hard work and talent and time put into this story. My thanks to the author.

I thought only the headmaster / headmistress could create portkeys inside Hogwarts?

Just re-read this and enjoyed it immensely. I usually don’t care for this pairing but I really enjoy your characterization of Ginny in this. I love the banter between her and Harry. Chapter 12 was hilarious and I loved how they decided to just sayck em” and leave Britain to Voldemort.

10/10
Defo recommend

Great story, Thanks for sharing!

Ugh, again teenage politicos

Loved it

"The Queen of England sent in a special magical section of Mi-5 shortly after the Ministry folded and Voldemort's untrained, arrogant followers never stood a chance."

Don't mess with the fucking Queen of England. Lesson learned eh?

I'm so glad that they got Kretcher and got to safety with Sirius! All of your characters were terrible people! A bunch of sociopaths!

this was a very lovely story.

nope

I love the ending, it's perfect! Always wished a fic would have Harry just leave, it makes the most sense for this type of Harry.

Final verdict:

Really great dialogue and character interactions. This made the fic for me.

Great characterization, some surprises there too, avoiding the usual tropes.

Great use of tone/mood, it was easy to empathize with what the main characters were feeling at the time.

Antagonists were generally well done, I could understand why they did what they did. Especially the Bones' and some of the other "good guys".

Some decisions the characters made were really strange, like Harry keeping Malfoy around as long as he did. He even mentioned that Malfoy has to go but then just keeps doing nothing about it for many months. Kind of felt like something enforced by author rather than what Harry actually would have chosen.

The animagus parts were pretty questionable, not really sure what more to say about that.

I liked how the hallows worked in this story, not some godlike power, but still utilized very well by Harry. I especially liked what Dumbledore said about uniting the hallows, felt kind of tongue in cheek response to readers expecting super MOD Harry :D

Overall I really enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing. :)

Love the premise of "Grindelwald raises Harry".

Love the ending.

Only downside is that it's really sad to read a story where all the canonically nice characters are a bunch of meanies ;)

I have to say, I really like the way you write dialogue.