Well Harry just keeps letting Draco go after he keeps trying to kill Harry so this was inevitable I guess.

Agree with previous review, non main characters were just dumb supporting characters to make the main characters look good.

Ok if you like satisfying endings don’t read it. The “happy ending” is the equivalent of being happy knowing that one day somewhere a tree will die at some point as deathis inevitable. If that isn’t enough to turn you away be prepared for the first third of the story to like three characters at best and the for the remainder like two. If you love seeing literally every character but the main ones shat on relentless and those characters actions to have little to no purpose beyond making the main characters and you by extension angry then go for it. I toughed it out hoping this eould be worth it but in the end this at best a mediocre fic that had its highest point in the first chapter. It’s a painful and over dramatic mess the rest of the time. In terms of readability from a grammar stand point its fine. From a technical perspective this is pretty weak, I literally do not care at all about any of the characters beyond them getting their comupance and so few do. Those that do are satisfying but in the end those are the bacon bits in this salad. This is fanfic. Eat chocolate and caviar. Not salad. I’m rambling DO NOT BOTHER READING UNLESS YOU LIKE TO HATE LITERALLY EVERYTHING IN A STORY. In closing do better and if your going for realism be realistic and have a better plan than this. Good lick and godspeed cause you need it

Well that was a bloody good chapter so far and Krecher thinking 'strange things, these humans' that set me off laughing madly.

Pity they didn't obliviate all her knowledge of horcruxes and then let her watch her WW collapse around her. She did choose easy over right!

Wait?! But what about Nagini? Isn't the snake also a Horuxus?

As one of the Loading Screen Quotes from the mod of the same name for fallout 4 puts it: Know when to turn the page and when to close the book.

Harry knew.

Amazing twist in the end! Loved the story

Ok, I did NOT see that ending coming. Can’t remember the last time I was surprised by a fanfic! Nicely done!

Wow what a twist
That was amazing
You really le dus on
Anyway thanks for
The story

Love the ending! Honestly I think although it wasn’t what I was expecting it was true to the characters and their story!

Just a Spade casually dropping by
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i should have expected dog sex long ago

I wasn't expecting that at all

Ooh. I like this. I like that Harry didn't get way with it. It seems a lot more realistic to me than a lot of these. I might have expected Harry to kill Voldemort first - and indeed you never even explained how he got the cup - but becoming a pariah because of his actions works brilliantly. Using Grindelwald is also a thing I haven't come across before, so kudos I guess. It worked.