Reviews for The Prettiest Regret |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this depiction of coming home from college and trying to stuff your new self back into your old skin. Would love to see this expanded, both the mother-daughter relationship and the bella-edward one. Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Well, that was a very nice distraction! Whew! Your writing is lovely. It's always nice to read a steamy one-shot paired with eloquent words. :) 'Icing on the cake. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, this would be great continued as a fic. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm laughing my ass off...fantastic end! I felt hot by their love making as well. This being one shot is the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrific! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() Wow this one-shot is amazing ! Oh my goodness you are such a talented writer. Thank you for sharing your talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your words just gave me a simultaneous ear- and eyegasm. Bravo. It was so rhythmic and I felt there was an actual beat when I read your wordsmithing and just, wow. The timing of your sentences and the italicizing (an example being that end there, hah) compounded by how you sometimes use adjectives as nouns - I feel like I'm describing a musical composition here. So yes, I think this speaks for itself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! AWESOME! o/s I really hope you could extend this a little I think it would be fun ;) thanks for sharing it on here ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy your writing style. You really bring your characters to life. Bella's character brought me back to my days of returning home from college for the summer...yeah being under your parents rules after tasting freedom...not so fun! Oh and Edward being the new Pastor's son. Loved it! Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this is one that I would like to see more of, then again, maybe not. |
![]() ![]() I wish there was more of this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said "a certain amount of depth" and sincerely all I could think when I finished reading it was: this girl is crazy. I dont even know for where to start with. Everything seemed so... Profound. So intense and in the right place. This one shot has more life and depth than a lot of stories out there. So thank you. It was one of the most pleasant story I read. If some day you want to give a chance to be multi chapters I would certainly read it all! |