man i wish you would pick this one back up, its always so fun to reread when i have the time, and its a rare concept to see. still a great work. ttfn.

Wonderful story. The way you seem to pack almost two stories together with Harry's life and then the events in Gotham is amazing. Nothing feels rushed, or like an after-thought. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Not a bad start but there is no way IN HELL that Harry would act like that.

I really enjoyed the story to this point, just sad you abandoned it.

Another great chapter that is sadly the last of it.

Not liking the thought she's going to succeed and royally fuck things up in taking that ring.

Though somehow I doubt it'll happen in the next and last chapter of this dropped story.

Well thats a twist. Well done.

Scarecrow is a monster. He's not exactly Joker but not THAT far off. He's one I prefer killed off in fanfics that have an MC that will actually put down the real twisted ones. Like the Z serial killer who's name im not going to attempt.

Very good work.

Great dialog. Good story so far.

Loving the dialog. So many stories ruined because of kids complaining about dialog and calling it filler. Its gotta be action action action or they bitch.

This is the rest copy pasted? Why?

No idea the point in this. This would merely be chaoter 5. Instead its just the other chapters copy pasted into one why?

Stops the heart? I immediately realized its severs the soul from the body. It seems the likely result. Even if it stopped the heart you wouldn't just instantly drop dead from that.

Greetings, salutations, and hello...here's hoping that this review finds you well! I must say, I stumbled on this story on another author's favs list, and I decided to give it a try, and I'm glad I did! I rather enjoyed the plot, premise, and story line! I plan to read the two available chapters of the prevail saga, and I must admit, I'm looking forward to more of this story! I can understand taking time off, dealing with writers block, and all...I haven't touched my story in over 10 years...but I do still think I'll be returning to it at some point...I hope your enjoying reading fanfics, and will one day nudge your muses to see if their willing to work for you again! Looking forward to the continuing adventures of Hermione and Bella in Kick-ass as well...I can't wait for Hermione to corrupt Hitgirl...that actually seems like it might be an interesting read! But, again, here's hoping that this finds you well, and at least still reading fics, and enjoying life! I guess if your willing to pm to let me know what the chances are of this continuing onto completion, go for it, if not, then just know I am waiting patiently for any updates, and so are the rest of us that have fav'd and followed these stories...just a suggestion, pick one or two stories, and try to focus on them for a few chapters, then switch, that way you continue all your stories, but don't burn out on any given one...if other stories pop up that demand to be written as well, then work on them, and just add them into the rotation...that's it for my suggestions, and I'll end the review by reiterating...I enjoyed the plot, the premise, and the story line, and here's hoping that when your ready, you'll return to finish both stories, this one and the prevail saga...and any other's that may ask you to continue them...TTFN