I like this story but it was a lot of weird random homophobia that gets know the way.

Uh...what? Okay, that grandma was a little... unexpected. But very well written. I'm enjoying this[insert evil cackle](shame you can't put emoji's in a review), and your writing is great as ever.

I would just like to comment in response to the author note of this chapter. Part of the trick of storytelling is convincing the audience to believe seemlessly, and while I dont have an issue with Umbridge being more cunning than canon, I do find the use of Veritaserum somewhat unbelievable. It is implied that Umbridge is doing what she is to Harry and Daphne to multiple people. Where is she getting the Veritaserum, which is supposed to be a highly controlled substance, to do this? Is she making it herself? If so, where is she getting the ingredients? Is there some potion master in the ministry slowly getting more and more anxious about strange requisition orders from fudge? The dose we see in canon ia very small and Umbridge would need a lot for 30 students. I’ve really enjoyed the way that you’ve built up this story and Daphne’s relationship with Harry so far, but i just wanted that this point sticks out becuase as a reader I dont feel as convinced as i should. I feel more groundwork could’ve been done to convince the readers of this point becuase right now it feels like a plot convience rather than a convincing part of the story. I understand that this story ia complete, but i hope that I might have shed a little light on why people might have had a “no wait, thats wrong” reaction to the Umbridge scene. I hope that this might help you in any other writing that you undertake. As I’ve mentioned I have enjoyed this story so far and look forward to reading to its conclusion.

Very nice

Loved this

iportant to whome not "important to who"

The Ministry did not "Decree" . A law was passed.

Doing a reread and just had a thought nearly a decade too late. Too bad Sirius didn't teach Harry to be an animagus, too. Then he'd have an escape plan if things went haywire.

I know you probably aren't going to read this, but here goes nothing. I really ike our story, but yo are painting Ron like a stupid child wo can't look past his prejudice and is a shitty friend in general and that is not true, he is great friend who understands and loves Harry like no other. I hate it, otherwise it is great

Okay.. so yes I reread this.. but can there be oneshots? Are there twins? Girls? A boy? Even though this is over I feel like it's a cliff hanger lol

Bravo! Really enjoyed how Voldy died like Caesar (RIP), with everyone hexing him once to prove a point. And I’m so happy that that cow Bulstrode is killed (poor Draco) and that Narcissa got away with it! A mother’s love is the most powerful force in the world indeed.

Am I the only one who was abhorred by Dumbledore’s impertinence telling Sirius to go to the drawing room and inviting him to sit down in the Black family home like he owned the place?

Honestly this is getting out of hand. I know ow Daphne is jealous but I feel like she's not actually trying to get along with hermione for Harry's sake.

Im commenting again.

1. To push some spoiler comments down a bit.
2. To prepare those whi wish to read the story.

This story is incredible. One of my favorite fanfictions ive ever read. That being said here are some thing that can help you determine if youd like to read it.

1. This book is heavily about the characters and their development. There is not a ton of action or fighting. If you need a book where theirs an explosion every 10 seconds this is not for you.

2. There isnt any dumbledor or weasley bashing. There is them making weird choices and then having to confront the fact that theyve not made great decisions.

3. This is what i would consider for fanfiction a bit of a slowburn. Their romance is not instant. It is so so worth it but it does take a bit.

4. Trigger warnings: there is character death but i wouldnt call it excessive.

5. Trigger warning: There are some spicy parts of the book and while the characters are being treated like and some even legal adults… they are still 15. I know that for some people thats a no. But nothing is ever explicit with anyone considered not if age in the book.

6. The entire read is worth the last two chapters. Its a wonderful book with so much character development and growth. That journey is so so so much fun but the culmination ending with the last two chapters was beautifully done. I highly highly recommend this book. The book is written in such a way that all the stuff we would consider boring in other fanfictions is riveting to me. It was trully awesome.

This story made me cry and laugh and i loved it. Top tier. The final scene of the battle i had full body chills and could barely read the words through tears. Just an incredibly well written fanfiction with really awesome character development.