Reviews for The Cupboard Series 2: Hermione's Book Nook |
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![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting take on 2nd year, and a nice continuation from your book 1. I look forward to seeing where you go with 3rd year. Well done and thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Years after this chapter has been posted, I know, but… Sirius looked emaciated, not emancipated. This chapter marks the second time you’ve used “slither” where you probably meant “sliver”. Harry used magic outside of school despite being warned that doing so could cost him his wand. Yes he’s in a magical house and yes the house is under a fidelius, but no one has told him if that makes it okay, and he’s twelve. Harry didn’t think werewolves were real? That they were just a story? He’s read all of Lockheart’s books, including the werewolf one, and he was there when Mick and Lockheart were talking about the one in WagaWaga. He knows they’re real at this point. Aside from those minor details, I’m really enjoying this story! I started the first one just a few days ago and I plan on going through to the end! |
![]() ![]() Great second story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please look in a dictionary for the words ‘slither’ and ‘sliver’. The story is good, and I am enjoying the differences between this and canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the best chamber of secret i read since the BOOK. BRAVO BRAVO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for a another great read!. Very nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How dare you leave a cliff hanger like that! Yes, the next story is complete and I can immediately jump to the next one, but I can still be indignant for those that had to wait whenver this story was first posted! Lol, really enjoyed the story dude and looking forward to the next one. Hurry up and write a sequel to Heroes Assemble already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can only imagine the conversations Luna is having with Tom. He's probably pulling his hair out. Was hoping her mind would eventually overwhelm him and the chamber would never be opened. But this is a fic and not a crack fic so I understand. |
![]() ![]() Loved it! Excited to see where you take it next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cock blocking, unforgivable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, Dumbledore is really loony. Luna is a gem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love having Sirius as a guardian; so much bullying (by Dumbledore mainly) could be happening without him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Harry is literally the surprised pikachu face meme at the end here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This holiday has been excellent. |