Reviews for The Cupboard Series 2: Hermione's Book Nook
jon reeve chapter 11 . 10/17/2019
/Y'know what I'd like to see? A fic where Harry actually proposes to her with a bookstore. Hmm, it's probably been done.

/This was cute. I think it is interesting that no one is commenting on his wealth. No sneaky selfish thoughts from the squatter that he then hired for his shop. Doesn't mean she didn't have them, but it was a nice change from the constant references to his wealth that abound in fics like this. Though, it may be warranted here, with him being as wealthy as described. Also, I suppose it is odd to jot hear it once, but since it's mostly from Harry's pov, it's not unreasonable.
jon reeve chapter 8 . 10/17/2019
No used bookstores? That makes no sense. If this is AU /on that aspect it's fine, but there is no support, as far as I am aware, for such a statement.

/This is an example of a problem I see sometimes in fics where the writers don't seem to think of the ramifications of the things that they make up or the details that they change.

/There are a number of explanations that I can think of to support such a statement; the easiest being that the goblin was only talking about the "wizarding world" in London, as that's what's pertinent to Harry's current business idea. If that's not the case, then I look forward to the revelation of a cultural explanation for no used bookstores.

Somewhat pompously,

Sleepyhawk502 chapter 37 . 10/6/2019
Great story! Love the changes you have made to the original. Thanks for sharing!
RipBudAce chapter 37 . 9/27/2019
Currently rereading this series. I like how Harry is coming out of his shell, getting ready to finally come into his own. Of course, Dark Lord II (Dumbledore) had to stick his crooked nose in to screw things up.
lav-has-an-account chapter 5 . 9/4/2019
lav-has-an-account chapter 4 . 8/30/2019
damn this keeps getting betteer
lav-has-an-account chapter 3 . 8/30/2019
lav-has-an-account chapter 2 . 8/30/2019

lav-has-an-account chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
marvinkitfox1 chapter 33 . 8/28/2019


He should be careful, lord Voldemort might just sue him for Trademark Infringement.
marvinkitfox1 chapter 23 . 8/28/2019
How is it possible that Lockhart does not get charged with assault, for removing Harry's bones?

Sure its in the magical world, and 'easily' fixable with an overnight stay in the hospital.

But really. What would happen to a teacher at a muggle school, if he so injured a student as to require an overnight stay in the hospital? Especially when the teacher was acting against the *very* explicit resistance of the student, and in a capacity and location where the teacher has no authority whatsoever?

I'll tell you. The teacher would be instantaneously suspended pending hearing, and would be invited down to the local police station. Very possibly for a permanent stay until said hearing occurred. And the school for be sued for *millions*
kimjo2 chapter 37 . 8/21/2019
Dumbledork got what he deserved. Thanks so much for the terrific story
CureCaligraphy chapter 27 . 8/15/2019
i just realized you got Harry a Mum and Dad as well as a proper Uncle. (claps)
CureCaligraphy chapter 26 . 8/15/2019
snrk- is that one of the horcruxes Sirius just shoveled into the fiendfyre oven?
CureCaligraphy chapter 22 . 8/15/2019
cleansing rituals- wait a minute.
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