Reviews for The Cupboard Series 2: Hermione's Book Nook
BookObsessed3000 chapter 37 . 1/22/2020
Albus Dumbledore yoU BASTARD
Druto chapter 37 . 11/20/2019
What about myrtle ?
Druto chapter 11 . 11/19/2019
Probably bankruptcy hahahha lol
Joking aside awesome chapter loved it
rmw5763 chapter 17 . 11/9/2019
Fuckin Sirius,lol good dud. Crazy ass fuck but... A good Person.
rmw5763 chapter 16 . 11/9/2019
Glad to see someone else is waking up other than Harry.
rmw5763 chapter 3 . 11/9/2019
Evil,Manipulative Dumdlick ! All for Greater Good,lol NOT ! Or STUPID ?
odonnellzoo99 chapter 37 . 11/6/2019
I liked this story, but I did have a problem with Dobby disappearing from the story as soon as Harry freed him.
I realize that Dobby may be too good of a bodyguard for your way of getting Harry into the COS to work, but Dobby risked a lot to protect Harry (in his strange Dobby way) while still owned by the Malfoys. I doesn't make any sense to me that he would leave Master Harry Potter Sir to be target practice for the entire student body after being freed or that Harry wouldn't call him to check and see how he is doing.
"Where's Dobby?" was a major distraction for me during the Christmas Holiday when the 3 Bachelors could have used some elf help and the stretch towards the end when Harry needed another loyal friend and more protection in the castle.
BerserkLittleCook chapter 34 . 11/4/2019
I'm impressed by that little moment about taking away the staff. It's shown like any other thing that Dumbledore would do in the cannon, and yet there's something to it that screams a wrongdoing
BerserkLittleCook chapter 11 . 11/2/2019
I just want to say, dear author, that because of you I'm not sleeping tonight. How could you write something so captivating? You monster ;)
chintz chapter 17 . 11/1/2019
Wonderful chapter, and I feel the need as an Aussie myself to express my complete agreement in the observation that our biggest export is back packers, pretty sure the amount of people I know that have versus that haven’t left the country is 10:1
AerynS chapter 37 . 10/20/2019
I like this Harry! He has more cunning than Canon Harry.
I like the way this Hermione reasons things out. The McGonnagal/Black/Lupin alliance is clever as well. Good job!
jon reeve chapter 31 . 10/17/2019
/So, did you have Hagrid come back to Hogearts for matches? Cause you have him in the stands in this chapter. You also mixed up some people in the last chapter or two, as well, but I didn't make note of it.

/I know some other have mentioned aimilar things inreviews, like when you confused numbers 93 and 95 in diagon alley, earlier. Instead of comparing 93 to 95, you compared 93 to 93, I think it was.

/Your work is somewhat peppered with mistakes like that. They are relatively minor, but one or two words can have a drastic effect on a statement or description. Especially when you consider the wordplay that some people are prone to use.
jon reeve chapter 11 . 10/17/2019
/Y'know what I'd like to see? A fic where Harry actually proposes to her with a bookstore. Hmm, it's probably been done.

/This was cute. I think it is interesting that no one is commenting on his wealth. No sneaky selfish thoughts from the squatter that he then hired for his shop. Doesn't mean she didn't have them, but it was a nice change from the constant references to his wealth that abound in fics like this. Though, it may be warranted here, with him being as wealthy as described. Also, I suppose it is odd to jot hear it once, but since it's mostly from Harry's pov, it's not unreasonable.
jon reeve chapter 8 . 10/17/2019
No used bookstores? That makes no sense. If this is AU /on that aspect it's fine, but there is no support, as far as I am aware, for such a statement.

/This is an example of a problem I see sometimes in fics where the writers don't seem to think of the ramifications of the things that they make up or the details that they change.

/There are a number of explanations that I can think of to support such a statement; the easiest being that the goblin was only talking about the "wizarding world" in London, as that's what's pertinent to Harry's current business idea. If that's not the case, then I look forward to the revelation of a cultural explanation for no used bookstores.

Somewhat pompously,

Reeve.
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 37 . 10/6/2019
Great story! Love the changes you have made to the original. Thanks for sharing!
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