Reviews for The Cupboard Series 2: Hermione's Book Nook |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Another great story! Nice touch with the snippets of life outside of Hogwarts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe you meant knowing smirk not skirk in the scene with professor dumb |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah fuck Fumbledore |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you made it smaller initially and forgot to change the amount because in one paragraph is says ten thousand and in the next it's a hundred thousand |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have a lot of great ideas would you mind if I use that incinerator idea as well? |
![]() ![]() ![]() you mean "Professor Snape got blasted into a wall" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm writing a fic of my own and I wanted to see if you'd mind if I used your idea with the goblin postal cubes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the very first paragraph could use some commas and perhaps be split into at least 2 sentences or a semicolon. it needs restructuring no matter what you do though. it is the epitome of run on sentences and while not always bad it took me 3 times of reading it to grasp what you were meaning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see a cake shop in their future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, Michael Dungaree... Mick Dungaree... Crocodile Dundee? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I need an explanation of where Sirius is? Or Remus, cause there is no way they wouldn't have been at the station. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no, please tell me poor luna isn't going to be affected by that monster who is tom riddle. I hope she drives him crazy and somehow accidentally destroys it |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Salazar’s staff! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting that Luna tried to cleanse the diary. Loved the course choosing! |