Reviews for The Cupboard Series 2: Hermione's Book Nook
DarkLordWhatsit chapter 26 . 4/15/2019
you have a lot of great ideas would you mind if I use that incinerator idea as well?
DarkLordWhatsit chapter 9 . 4/13/2019
you mean "Professor Snape got blasted into a wall"
DarkLordWhatsit chapter 7 . 4/13/2019
I'm writing a fic of my own and I wanted to see if you'd mind if I used your idea with the goblin postal cubes.
DarkLordWhatsit chapter 7 . 4/13/2019
the very first paragraph could use some commas and perhaps be split into at least 2 sentences or a semicolon. it needs restructuring no matter what you do though. it is the epitome of run on sentences and while not always bad it took me 3 times of reading it to grasp what you were meaning.
DarkLordWhatsit chapter 5 . 4/13/2019
I see a cake shop in their future.
TheProphetBVB chapter 17 . 3/28/2019
Oh my god, Michael Dungaree... Mick Dungaree... Crocodile Dundee?
Phillies2 chapter 37 . 3/23/2019
Ok, I need an explanation of where Sirius is? Or Remus, cause there is no way they wouldn't have been at the station.
Phillies2 chapter 11 . 3/23/2019
oh no, please tell me poor luna isn't going to be affected by that monster who is tom riddle. I hope she drives him crazy and somehow accidentally destroys it
spinnerofdark chapter 37 . 3/17/2019
: )
Capecodcanal chapter 33 . 1/19/2019
Salazar’s staff! Great chapter!
Capecodcanal chapter 30 . 1/19/2019
Interesting that Luna tried to cleanse the diary. Loved the course choosing!
Capecodcanal chapter 26 . 1/19/2019
Horocrux destroyed, unbeknownst to all. Love the reconnections with Sirius and Remus.
Capecodcanal chapter 19 . 1/19/2019
Great chapter. As feared, sweet Luna is wandering about with Riddle’s diary.
Capecodcanal chapter 17 . 1/19/2019
Love Remus and Sirius. Not so sure about The Australian Backpacker ...
Capecodcanal chapter 16 . 1/19/2019
Remus! Yay!
I’m glad Hermione told Minerva.
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