Pretty good chapter. I wonder what will happen j

This was an excellent chapter

I wonder where this will go

Interesting turn of events

This was a good chap to

This was a pretty grsT chapter

This was a good chap glad the goblins were helpful

Weird chapter

Wonder what's going to happen now

Pretty good follow up chapter

This was a crazy chap

This was a weird first chapter

This was nicely done..

I thought Harry had more money than that. Either way, it is a pity that Harry didn't try harder to avoid paying Lucius a knut more than required. Never give an evil person more resources if you can avoid it. Oh well...

It remains nice to see something other than a repeat of canon...

So I really like this series. But I see a big problem this chapter. Everyone suddenly became idiots. To start, you have the Head of the DMLE take Harry to Azkaban without first informing him of both the dementors and their abilities, but what procedures he will be expected to follow. Then you have her keep walking without him. This WOULD NOT HAPPEN! He is a 12 year old in the prison holding the worst of Britains criminals, an adult would never be more than five feet away. Period. Then the meeting with Sirius. This was perhaps the single most terrible instance I have ever seen of them meeting. Sirius failed to produce anywhere near an emotional response and didn't take the opportunity of finally meeting his godson to explain his innocence. This follows no train of thought, and while it MIGHT have been possible to play it off as dementors, they are guarded by patroni (please note this is the correct plural), and he would have a clear head for what is likely the first time in years. Allow me to make it abundantly clear that he would have used this to profess and argue for a trial LOUDLY. Harry also appears as a cardboard cutout here, not gradually or even really suddenly shifting emotions except to go from Raging to silent. There are several better ways to handle it than this. Moreover, I am also annoyed at how disorganized Harry appears. If nothing else, asking the woman in charge of law enforcement about the issue with the instances of underage magic is both easy and would have been at the VERY top of my priorities. It is...disturbing how you feel you have to adhere to this idea that events must happen as they do in the books in order to continue the plot in some manner. Rather, I'd hoped you would have taken the base you started to build in the first book, and worked to expand it organically into its own story instead of continuing to so closely follow the books.I am hopeful this changes, but if it doesn't, I will likely stop reading because of the lack of creativity I was hoping to see.