Reviews for Lady of the Lake chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
I love how black and white your Fics are in comparison. This story is just getting better and better. Hermione and Draco are really good together no matter the spin on the story. Though Narcissa was very easy to convince. I guess she trust her son that much. I can't wait to see how Hermione and Narcissa play off of each other.
LadiePhoenix007 chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
So much brilliancy in this one chapter! Draco is so amazingly sly and I am so glad you continue to keep him that way. He hasn't lost his 'edge' just because he's bowing to Hermione; which of course is to serve his own purpose in the end. Loved the interaction between mother & son, so much being said and NOT said. - Hermione's chat with Harry was a great bit because it shows how much their friendship has deteriorated.

Embrace the madness!
pagyn chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
I love the way you characterize Theo in both of the stories. They're similar, but not the same. He's certainly not some I've-been-redeemed do-gooder who saw the light. He's still very much a Slytherin. He is definitely a good first recruit.

Shift away! ... As long as you keep clacking away at the keyboard and churning out the chapters.
Chester99 chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
I'm all for upping the rating to M. :-)

Loved Draco and Theo's conversation. So much was said without saying the words. ;-)
Loved the pictures that was made with Draco sitting at Hermione's feet and her carding her fingers through his hair like a beloved pet. Hehehe

I like your portrayal of Hermione. So many writers make her too nice and sweet. Yes, she could be nice and sweet but she was a strong, independent young woman, with a temper that would have made Molly Weasley proud and a vengeful streak that would have impressed Bellatrix. Because of her strong personality she had trouble making friends. Your doing a good job of painting her in a more complete light than many writers do.

Hmmm, now I'm really curious to know what happened with Ron.

BTW, the Malfoy family was my favorite in the series. Not a fan of the Weasley's. I always saw Lucius as an opportunist. I don't think he was truly evil. Although I have to say my favorite character was Severus Snape. Hated when JKR killed him off. :-( He was so complex and deep.
Naysaykaybay chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
I love both your stories so it is win/win. And changing from T to M? Yes, please
NightshadePrincess chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
Really loving this story. It brightens up my day with how dark it is. :)
Pank98 chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
Yeaaah I didn't expect for you to update this quickly but I'm certainly hyped up ;) I don't mind the M-rating the slightest - if anything, I'm more than excited :P Can't wait for the naughty parts but I'm even more curious for their plans and it's a first :) chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
Lovely as ever. Draco is putty in Hermione's hands! And I do love that Theo is now involved. He's one if my favorites!
Wolfman217 chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
Awesome story :D
If you switch it to M please don't over do it on that stuff, I actually want to read a proper story and not Dramione having Sex every chapter. It's such an interesting plot, I don't want it to be overshadowed by lemons and what not. :)
Wolfman217 chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
oooohhh Dark Lady Hermione...oh yes :D
LadiePhoenix007 chapter 4 . 9/10/2014
Astounding! I really appreciate the pace of this fic. I really liked how quick Theo understood everything that was going on with the situation of Hermione's 'pureblood' status and how he was so willing to allow her to look into his mind. Very clever idea about an 'off switch' she can utilize if needed, too. - I have absolutely no problem with the rating change of T to M. Dramione love/smut (implied or actual) is always a plus! I am sincerely looking forward to the next update to see what happens at the two meetings.

I do hope to see new update for 'The Die' as well! Love your writing!
Mistress-Cinder chapter 3 . 9/9/2014
Yep! Draco is cunning manipulative and knows how to play the game, but this one-on-one with Hermione has him struggling for a little control. I see the trouble about Harry brewing in the distance. Man did Ron get played... Harry and Hermione formed a bond in that tent while on the hunt & on the run. She is not going to want to hurt him ever. Her followers might not like that though...
Chester99 chapter 3 . 9/7/2014
Love it so far. It's rare to read a dark Hermione fic that's actually well done. You've done fabulous with The Die so I have faith you'll do just as well with this one.

BTW, LOVED your chapter on Dumbledore in The Die. That is EXACTLY how I see him. I was cheering Narcissa on while I read that part. :-D I started out liking Dumbledore in the beginning of the series. By the end I didn't care for him at all. He showed himself to be not only manipulative, but hypocritical and self serving as well. I couldn't believe he would willing leave Draco, a student of his, in a situation where he was in mortal danger. I found it sad because he was supposed to be one of the good guys. :- (
pagyn chapter 3 . 9/7/2014
Another great chapter! Ron really walked into that one. Gotta wonder: 1) why Potter allowed her to be pushed aside when she had always stuck up for him; 2) why she still is protective of him; and 3) how long will her ilet's not totally obliterate the both of them/i last.
LadiePhoenix007 chapter 3 . 9/7/2014
Absolutely mind-blowing! Draco's plan was flawless and even more so, Hermione's "poor twisted ankle!" Ron fell right into that and I loved it. How can either Draco or Hermione deny the sparks between them? They are completely perfect for one another! Ready for chapter 4! Incredible job again!
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