Reviews for Dark Mage Naruto!
unknow99 chapter 6 . 3/7
i like how we get a back story to the hole zeref thing. now they both think he is dead and he just got really wounded and he stays there wounded but mavis in her spirit form heals him keeps him from dying because he was a fairy tail member and then do a time skip to tenuro island were he steals Acnologia's power but before that happens the second master come and tells makarov why he was sealed away then leaves then the S-class trials happen and a Acnologia attacks but this time naruto attacks and kills him and taking his power then with his new power he starts to change back in the beginning and attacks them but slowly come back and with this new power he goes and attacks zeref and they destroy the island they are on on and kill each other and there the story has a nice ending and done if you want to take it and you could make it longer to it's up to you tell what you think
Stickermans50 chapter 6 . 2/9
Your best chapter ever. Really loved it. The fight was cool. Zeref can't unseal that's bad and Jiraiya is dead. Hmmmm. I think he is still alive and well. That is the whole reason you mentioned him i think. Btw i loved snowball he is the best dragon ever. Gonna read Odd Job's Uzumaki now.
Stickermans50 chapter 5 . 2/9
Cool chapter. Seems you wrote this after reading some latest chapters HuH. Nice. So Naruto is a failure demon huh well nice work. Also why did Zeref seal him if he wanted to die. just think about it. Lol. Also telling Wendy everything was funny as hell. XD
Stickermans50 chapter 4 . 2/9
Cool cHapter. Really funny loved it. Gonna read chapter #05 now.
Stickermans50 chapter 3 . 2/9
Cool chapter Lord. This is the first time, i felt real emotions. I really am impressed a lot. It seems you make your stories funny. But you can make stories in pretty much every category. Cool job. Zabuza ! Pure badassness.
Stickermans50 chapter 2 . 2/9
No pairing. Make him stay in fairy tail for a little while and then make him leave. Though i know what you'll decide will be cool. As for the chapter itself. Really cool and i just loved it. Nice Lucy joke lol and don't forget his tauras meal XD
Stickermans50 chapter 1 . 2/9
Great beginning. Really loved it. Btw what magic does Naruto possess? Guess i'll have to read more to find out.
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 1 . 2/8
great beginning
Guest chapter 2 . 2/8
naruto/erza all the way!
SILVERE ESPADACHIN chapter 6 . 2/7
Snowball will avengeeeee
Thetylersz chapter 6 . 2/7
Awesome, Please update
StrongGuy159 chapter 6 . 2/7
Awesome & funny story continue please.
Lightningblade49 chapter 6 . 2/6
Snowball died a noble death, does tht give naruto ice slayer magic?
Blazing Saiyan chapter 6 . 2/6
Seriously? When you're going to do something then
don't do it half assed
make naruto a real evil badass
this is why most fics get lousy
silver uli chapter 6 . 2/6
ehhhh...ok that was nice
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