Reviews for The Chaos Paradox?
Marsawesome chapter 2 . 4/4
Would be cool if you could make the paragraphs smaller
Anon Ymus chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
Can I just say that you need a beta desperately, my eight year old little sister knows more SPaG than you, no offence intended.
gingy chapter 6 . 3/26/2015
yeah go artimis
Guest chapter 4 . 3/26/2015
hestia do hestia put that as a suggestion
DDDstuff19 chapter 8 . 3/9/2015
Great story idea! I love a dark, evil and powerful percy. However you should really work on Grammar and punctuation. I am sorry to say this, but it's really bad! But like I said, I love the concept and its a fun story.
You should write more like it!
Me D chapter 12 . 3/1/2015
Good story! I'll go check out the one you adopted now! :D
Gae chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Gay.
timijaf chapter 7 . 9/20/2014
Good I think he should stay evil a leopard dosent change it's spots
Gumball8866 chapter 5 . 9/19/2014
Wooo. (Spins around in swivel chair several times). I cant wait for the next chapter.
Dakoat chapter 5 . 9/18/2014
Awesome story keep writing i am looking forward to reading more
Utoris Son Of Gaia chapter 5 . 9/18/2014
Also guys Sorry if it looks a little weird when reading on iPad or desktop or laptop I created it with the format on phone for the best look so sorry
timijaf chapter 5 . 9/18/2014
Great chapter can't wait for next one persohone
Utoris Son Of Gaia chapter 4 . 9/15/2014
Okay.. good So in the lead so far is Persephone with 3 votes Keep voteing
timijaf chapter 4 . 9/15/2014
Persophne
Croushore chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
Persephone
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