|Reviews for Rainbow Dash's Five Nights at Freddy's|
| Drago The Firesword Dragon chapter 8 . 9/23/2019
I love how, ironically, Rainbow thought for a second Foxy did the Bite of 87 (like many people), and the true irony was that Golden Freddy, the originally Fredbear, was the one who in FNAF4 was confirmed to be the perpetrator of the Bite of 87!
True symbolic irony!
| Spidershadow5 chapter 8 . 7/31/2017
For someone who's not really into MLP, this is pretty on point.
Criticisms: Feels like Schmidt didn't really do that much to cover up the deaths.
It seems unlikely that nobody besides one guy would last for more than 4 nights, and if they quit, somepony would've spoken up.
Final chapter is anticlimactic. Not just the fight, but there's nothing that shows the kids moving on, or anything like that.
Pretty good otherwise, although I'm still not a fan of "Foxy is a good guy." It's okay here.
| Danny chapter 8 . 7/27/2016
you could add a little more feelings into it and what the animatronics are feeling or something but besides that it was amazing story telling and you should be proud of it and I don't know how to spell animatronics exactly so that's probably wrong but who cares
| Remzal Von Enili chapter 8 . 2/2/2016
I'm going to be honest. When I found this I thought it was going to be goofy or just plain dumb. However I was pleasantly surprised. You mixed the two together well and managed to hold a tone that was respectful to the sadness and horror of fnaf without drifting to far into the dark for it to feel fitting for Mlp.
| melani chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
nadiavam se da me ousnete da igraia na tazi igra zashtoto e iaka no az taka mislia dano da e mnogo iaka
| Sc0ut chapter 8 . 12/4/2015
What? No! Foxy! I am literally crying over my iPad as I type this. Why did he have to go, too? He was good!
| Sc0ut chapter 7 . 12/4/2015
| NOYB chapter 8 . 10/3/2015
Now RD is 80% cooler
she's the first night guard who looked night mode freddy right in the eye & lived to tell about it plus she stayed for all 5 nights
| AutumnLeafPOM chapter 8 . 9/6/2015
Omg, greatest story ever! Loved it!
| Jedi Alex Colbent chapter 2 . 7/30/2015
Wow, it took you about maybe three weeks after the game had been out to predict what others only just NOW found out: Golden Freddy was behind the Bite of 87'.
| LeatherJacketCharizard chapter 8 . 7/27/2015
LOVED this fic. The characters were well-written, the pacing was just about perfect and I liked the idea of Rainbow Dash making friends with one of the animatronics. Definitely a favorite of mine and I'd recommend it to any fan of either represented franchise.
| LeatherJacketCharizard chapter 4 . 7/27/2015
Very good chapter.
| NeoSpearBlade chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
I have already read this story (and added it to my favorites months ago) but with the release of FNaF4, I have to say the following.
In this chapter (#2), you wrote this:
"The doll biter was actually Golden Freddy, who was what Freddy looked like if he had a gold body and a blue tie and hat."
While he actually had a purple hat and tie, your theory on who caused the bite was spot on as Golden Freddy (Real name Fredbear) WAS the cause of the bite as it was revealed in FNaF4, although it was from a prank gone horribly wrong.
I don't know who else has this theory-proven-true, but to me, your story was the first I read to put said theory-proven-true out there and I feel that you should know this.
Pat yourself on the back, your theory turn out to be true!
| Anonymouse chapter 8 . 4/18/2015
u should do 6 and 7 night!
| ToyFoxy1986 chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
That was pretty good. I didn't expect something that good from a random writer.