|Reviews for Broken Dreams and New Beginnings|
| ViridianXoxoGirl chapter 2 . 4/7/2017
Duplica?! You know you have used Melody?!
| ViridianXoxoGirl chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
Wtf dude a iron? No why didn't you just make Tracey get angry and break up rather than a fucking clothes iron
| OrgasmicYaoi chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
FYI Misty never belongs with anyone because she abuses everyone with her contant bitching and punching poor Ash on the head with her man fists *flips hair*
| The Dark Side Has Yaoi chapter 2 . 9/14/2009
That's weird, I knew it was Duplica...
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2007
that was good but what were you thinking i mean you do not put in stuff like that ,you can think but you don't write that stuff down on a public web site dam what were you thinking
| gladdecease chapter 7 . 6/16/2004
Yay! Ash won! Now Rudy has to leave! I hope you update soon, 'cause I want to find out how it ends. Good job! Later!
| aoisenshi chapter 7 . 11/11/2003
are you going to continue it..or is this the end? I surely hope not! Anyway, if you do update a next chapter, plz mail me then. Thanks!
| kazokuhouou chapter 7 . 10/5/2003
This story kicks ass!
| AAAC chapter 2 . 8/30/2003
Good story and very interesting screen names pal!
| EXEXEXEXEX chapter 1 . 3/30/2003
Eww. I'm sorry, but I don't like Tracey and Misty together. Tracey's too good for that whiny little bitch! And I couldn't see Tracey reacting that violently. -_- POO! 4/10
| Suffering chapter 7 . 8/22/2002
great story, can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work. by the way, when is the next chapter coming out? anyways, great peice of writing!
| kitty kat chapter 7 . 12/18/2001
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!YOU HAVE TO FINISH DAMIT! the story was getting gOOD! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH!
| oi chapter 7 . 11/18/2001
r u ever going to finish this story i love it and would like to see the last chapter out please
| Jacay chapter 1 . 6/23/2001
Ooooooo...HEY! I've read this seomwhere! I was LOOKING for it! AND I FOUND IT! Kinda...well anyway, it is *really* good! Really, really, really, really, really, really, really...you get the point. I liked it. Alot. At least this part. Never read this part, I LOVE it though, but I've read part 2...and nothing else. I won't review chapter 2 since it would pretty much be repeating this. Very good.
| Lex Lexa chapter 7 . 4/22/2001