Reviews for The Terrible Tournament
Epeefencer chapter 4 . 6/13
Skele-Gro is used to regrow bones that are beyond magical healing. Bones that are simply broken are healed by magic as was pointed out in the books, Madam Pomfrey told Harry she could heal broken bones in a trice, but since Lockhart had vanished his bones they would need to be regrown. You also misuse many words and misspell many too. Things like focust instead of the proper focused. You also misspell all as al and off as of constantly. While your overall story is pretty good, your spelling and improper formatting really detracts from it.
Zale potter chapter 20 . 6/2
Love this one as i love the first look forward to the third and final 't wait to see what that ones holds.
Zale potter chapter 19 . 6/2
To bad he did not duel cho as the second he could have her understanding she not the princess any more.
Zale potter chapter 18 . 6/2
She could some of those bands that the others use till she gains control again.
Zale potter chapter 17 . 6/2
Well now he will slow down and learn maybe love the ending was funny.
Zale potter chapter 16 . 6/2
Sounds like there school just gained a big batch of students so looks like a good portion of them will be smart rather than sheep.
Zale potter chapter 15 . 6/2
Nice turn of events the big battle just sound that much more fun to read.
Zale potter chapter 14 . 6/2
Interesting can't help but wonder if there troubles with Dumbledore are over if the just had a small taste of whats to come.
Zale potter chapter 13 . 6/2
Ok there starting to sound like a deadly little group and there powers alone would make for some nice fights,Duels.
Zale potter chapter 12 . 6/2
very nice well written.
Zale potter chapter 11 . 6/2
Nice was hoping things would out now if they can just return the kindness Molly and the other did revenge would be set to be served.
Zale potter chapter 10 . 6/2
Wow sounds as if the twins mite need to swap schools to always like it better when the twins were on Harry's side would be better if a few others at Hogwarts students and staff joined the others at Harry's new school.
Zale potter chapter 9 . 6/2
Nice maybe this cools things off for now.
Zale potter chapter 8 . 6/2
Snape is in bigger trouble once Sirius finds out that he been Bullying Harry around.
Zale potter chapter 7 . 6/2
Love how there bond keeps changing and adding new things to it bet this makes there minds shields even stronger.
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