I'm kind of on Borsk Felya's side here.

Funny how the death star is almost entirely unnecessary.

I dislike how quickly Mara turns against vader.

Awwh I was hoping for her to fall

I think that your protagonists are hot garbage

That was a joke

Rebellion is not a Disease it is the greatest of diseases

Is everyone gonna tignore the fact that leia ans luke were both kidnapped from vader as children denied them any knowledge of their heirtage and then brainwashed them into hatinfg him. Besides the jedi order failed massively it isnt gonna magically improve itself just bevause vader dies. Ultimately their fighing over a diffrent set if opinion over what essentially is a religion anout the force the jedi dont acknowledge anyone who doesn’t follow their path and declares them heritics. Even during the republic it wasn’t illegal to be a sith as they had the freedom of religion. Also the phropcey on the chosen one said he bring balance to the force nothing about him destroying the sith as the balance was broken to much favoring the lightside so in order to balance it the jedi had to fall along withh the sith to form a new order that teaches both sides. If their following the will of the force whatever anakin does is the will of the dorce he is the child of the foce or its avatar in flesh whatever actions he does is in line with what the dorce desires so if the jedi go against gim that mean their going against the theing they proclaim to follow the will of rhe force.

I hate how everyone always shitting on him
What the hell do you wxpect hes the fucking ruler of a multi million planests empire obviously hes gonna have to have to be harsh with rebels. What dies the rebels think will happen if rhey kill him nothing the empire far to massive for it to fall apart with the death of one lone figure. Unlike Palpatine he has a celar obvious successor being starkiller so in fighting for leadership wouldnt happen. The end result if they mangaed to kill him is he will be made into a martyr. The emoire exonomy will take a massive temporary hit do the sudden lose of leadership causing widespread choas and disorder. It is virtually impossible dor them to reinstall democracy they arent one to begin with the rebels are just a mash up of miltiple diffrent terriost cells and people either to stubborn to know when to quit Organna or idiotic they dont have the manpower or the resuources necessary to run a democracy let alone enforce it ultimately it would collaps in on itseld with under abyeae before infighting over individual planetary interests

Vader makew some seriously good points about the jedi and their hypocri

What a fantastic story! You did an amazing job with this. Really crossing my fingers to see this as an official AU Universe

This resides at number 1 best written Star Wars fanfiction I have ever read. I seriously wish there was a way to see all of this in the theaters. Kudos to you, you absolute master of writing.

Well done!

Yeah ok skilled to the last few chapters, pretty much played out like I thought it would. No real twist of anything. Such a shame, this is something that happens say to much.

Luke, Leia, Bail and Breha are all really annoying. Anakin has a lot to answer for? What about you Bail? Also this is playing out to much like the movies it is kinda pointless, plus I am pretty sure I can guess how this will end, if I am wrong great I am right then we'll that would be a waste.

So far you had a really good story, pardon my language, but then you screwed up. Raising someone from the dead just for "love" is an extremely selfish act and I'm even more surprised that Luke would even go along with it, even when he saw Yoda himself accept his mortality.