So far you had a really good story, pardon my language, but then you screwed up. Raising someone from the dead just for "love" is an extremely selfish act and I'm even more surprised that Luke would even go along with it, even when he saw Yoda himself accept his mortality.

Honestly I wasn't really enjoying this but the moment I saw that Luke thought of obi-wan as his father I was done. What a disappointing overused idea really I am so bored of it. Tho to be fair this one was written years ago so maybe it wasn't overused then.

lmao love that marriage proposal like, I'm a jedi and you're a jedi and we both saw the future so marriage right?
AAWWW ANAKIN! YOU CAN DO IT! I BELIEVE IN YOU!

what a delightful, awesome, fun, thrilling, amazing story! thank you very, very much for writing it!

aaaawwwwww cute
but sad
but cute

we are live here at the imperial inauguration of lord Nova and- wait, what's this!
its, its, BY THE FORCE, ITS ANAKIN SKYWALKER WITH A STEEL CHAIR
Tamith: wait, master, I know his weakness, THE HIGH GROUND
... starkillers gonna starkill, I guess
nooooo Malysa!

talon karrde! yes! I love the him!
NOOOOOOO! DAD VADER! YOU CANT!

yeah, vade is right that none of these people who WANT to be emperor/empress should have the power
the amount of backstabbing between them is kinda funny tho

of course, if everything was going to be this perfect, we wouldn't have 7 more chapters

HOLY F-

INTERESTING AF
LOOK AT ALL THAT PLOT THICKENING
DELIGHTFUL

oh, wow, look at all that Treason
FUN!

oh boba fett is SMART
its awesome and terrifying to watch
ah. thrawn wants ysalamiri. for vader? oof, hes going to learn the force is not what gives skywalkers their insane luck and strategic mind lol

omg I love to see the beginning of the empire!
well, I love to see anything through thrawn's eyes, he is so observant and sharp
and CALM
immediately adapting to all these manor twists, like
yeah, hes awesome

ooooo spycraft and self-flagellation! exciting!

already? oh, right, that was a climax. that's where empire strikes back ends.
wow, vader actually being introspective and thinking about his actions? considering the kind of person, the kind of husband and father he wants to be? ok, I'm really proud of him! there's hope for him yet!